Reviews for Good & Evil
BellwardEverlark chapter 25 . 9/13/2017
Gotta say I don't like how she lied to Emmett and took off... But this story is so good I can't stop reading it
HisLove chapter 32 . 8/10/2017
How have I just now found this story? I've been stuck in a rut for a month. This saved my dismal summer.
HisLove chapter 27 . 8/10/2017
I love a good story cliffhanger. This is one of the best I've read. Ever.
jk chapter 25 . 3/7/2017
did she even load them? and seriously...shes not gonna get the fucking drop on a werewolf with a fucking shotgun...a small gun...bullet to the heart would be a surprise though...just sayin
jk chapter 24 . 3/7/2017
dana should be fired, you don't tell the family of a patient that shes NOT GRIEVING RIGHT. Seriously? what the fuck was that? Stupid bitch.
jk chapter 16 . 3/7/2017
that seemed like a big what to do over nothing...bella was missing for what? a few hours? and her boo boo on her knee smelled of infection already? even when covered with her clean sweatpants infection magically set in ...in just a few hours? yup totally believable...and it was totally believable that she needed a iv...LOL
seriously you should take another look at this chapter...theres a lot of spelling mistakes too.
jk chapter 13 . 3/7/2017
is bella EVER NOT in the mood? Honestly Edwards just tanwhores left overs...what the fuck is there to drool about? NOTHING
jk chapter 12 . 3/6/2017
I don't really get why you don't have bella put some fucking sense in jakes head...she didn't say shit when jake said that jim didn't do anything...IE time for bella to open her stupid pathetic fucking mouth and explain.
jk chapter 11 . 3/6/2017
why does bella have to constantly BEG Edward to be with her? he just gives his body away to the sperm dumpster...but the woman he loves? he makes her fucking beg for him its fucking sick and pathetic.
jk chapter 10 . 3/6/2017
I'm confused...he fucked Tanya why? because hes a horny idiot who doesn't mind sticking his dick in cold garbage? LOL...he wanted to know what it felt like to have 2000 other mens cum on his dick?
jk chapter 8 . 3/6/2017
I feel so betrayed...LOL Edward gave his virginity to tanwhore sperm dumpster denali...and he was with her for DAYS! probably naked the whole time too. fucking disgusting. god you could have picked ANYONE why did it have to be such a used up whore?
jk chapter 7 . 3/6/2017
its really fucking sad how bella lets Edward use her...he fucks WHORES bella! hes fucking disgusting...I mean come on...any guy that would have so little respect as too try to get sexual with you when theres another couple in the room doesn't deserve you. and to make it even worse Edward knew damn well that lauran was thinking she was with EDWARD.
Your version of Edward is fucking gross.
jk chapter 6 . 3/6/2017
you had a MIND READER give his VIRGINITY away to a woman that has been with more men then anyone?
I'm alittle confused...I really don't think Edward would fuck someone as used up as Tanya. sorry just no...shes a nasty fucking whore and I don't think Edwards upbringing would allow him to lust after a whore. If anyone I think he would have went for irina...except shes a whore too. Tanya was old and ugly anyway...seriously where is that girls neck?
jk chapter 1 . 3/6/2017
that moment when bella told Edward what books she liked...LOL she sounded like such and idiot...she names two classics and tells him the fucking authors? like hes never heard of them or like its a remake or something...it just really read wrong...just the titles...as clique as they were would have sufficed.
fanfictionalcolic chapter 32 . 1/14/2017
Thanks for sharing
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