Vampire Edward should be pure ..his virginity is belong to Bella..this vampire Edward was so many flaws..despite his ability a mind reader...he should be the most intelligent and brightest male in the world..but his character was kind of weak and dumb...lost his virginity to Tanya...so annoying and stupid..that why I just STOP reading...stupid character of all"vamp Edward " I have ever read..

you better not have Tanya fuck Charlie...having your dad and boyfriend lust after the same whore is fucking gross

that whore dana was a total fucking cunt, I was pissed that Edward was all nice to her putting his arm over her shoulders and placating her after she was such a fucking bitch to bella...
Edward fucking sucks

I'm confused...bella was kidnapped for like five minutes...and in those five minutes she got sick and a fever set in? she was so weak that she couldn't walk?
hmmm, how ...convienant

funny how something like sex with a nasty whore completely changes Edward...

I liked him better when he wasn't soo used up LOL

funny how bella has to wait...has to marry Edward to get in is pants...but all tanwhore had to do was spread her legs

Edwards all "i will make you feel so good youll scream my name"

guess what Edward? your not the only man that has that ability...so don't act so fucking smug! shit jasper could make bella scream his name without even touching her...ALL men have fingers and mouths and cocks...and yours Edward is not fucking made of gold...yours is used up and gross! you fucked tanwhore for fucks sake

I cant get over the fact that Edward would fuck a whore...its just so unlike Edward...

why not have him with someone that isn't used as the worlds fucking sperm dumpster?

so the pure mind reader with morals...had sex with a 1000 year old whore? yaaa that's likely..

that's fucking gross...sooo gross. Tanya has been with thousands of men...and Edward can read minds...and he went there not once, twice or three times...but spent several nights with her...and they don't sleep...so he probably fucked her like 50 times?

that's fucking disgusting

at the end of chapter 4 Edward says he doesn't like the friend zone...too bad you put yourself there huh assward.

I wish he really was in the friend zone, he treats bella like shit.
we all know hes not REALLY in the friend zone...bella will take whatever scraps he wants to give her

Edward says we should part ways before I get more attached an bella says...stop being so cryptic? How the fuck was that cryptic? IDIOT

and Edward starts a fight and she cant believe that jake is capable of "such violence"? LOL bellas a fucking moron!

and Edward treats her like shit, he can go fuck himself

I don't like that you had bella crying like a little bitch in the woods for no fucking reason...awwwww new school...its sooooo hard...LOL sissy

I've read this story several times over the years and really love it. But I sure wish you could write an epilogue. I always felt this story needed one to cap it off.

Great chapter, so much happening. Can't wait.

Brilliant, joyful, like spring shoots.