Reviews for Regrets on the Eve of Battle
soni13 chapter 1 . 1/5/2009
oh very nice job! haha i thought you were on the mark when hohenheim said that if he didn't see his family aging, it wasn't happening. once again, excellent writing!
taranoire chapter 1 . 1/5/2009
I loved this. You captured his emotions and thoughts really well, and I could actually see it happening. The style of writing was also eloquently done. :)