Reviews for Beautiful Happiness, Book 1: Life's Gift
Guest chapter 4 . 6/17
The story is good so far, but I don't think she should be complaining or whining about anything offered to her. Especially about 'not wanting to sleep on the couch'. As an orphan who is constantly traveling, she would probably sleep on grass, or roads, which, mind you, is most likely dirtier and more uncomfortable than a couch.
Starfire99 chapter 19 . 5/5/2016
I think you need to rename your OC's from the orphanage. You have a story based on an anime from Japan, with characters who all have Japanese names, but you give all your OC's western names with the exception of Inari. It'd be like if you had a story you based on a series that took place in Germany. All the characters have German names, and then you make OC's who all have Korean names. The only reason it would make sense would be if there was a plot-based REASON for them to have Korean names. Or in your case, western names. But to my knowledge of your story up until this point, there isn't a reason for their names not fitting.

Sorry, but the names just don't match the story and need to be changed.
Guest chapter 13 . 7/3/2014
Your timeline is fcked
Kiyoshiin chapter 18 . 6/21/2014
I loved every chapter so far. Wanted to review before but I couldn't stop reading chapter to chapter xD
Lukus chapter 30 . 4/1/2014

If the next book doesn't come out I will find you...and I will kill you
infernofield108 chapter 3 . 2/21/2014
Wow this is pretty good one thing I hope to find out soon is where in the timeline this is I'm guessing before chunnin exams but yeah the story is wonderful
HavenHearts chapter 24 . 12/24/2013
You know no matter how hard it is to write the fix that loyal people such as myself continue to read and enjoy your story. Keep that in mind no matter how hard it is I appreciate your writing and always get a laugh out of your story. Keep writing and never lose faith! HavenHearts
MusicAngel13 chapter 4 . 12/14/2013
epic and sweet
xXimmortalXx chapter 30 . 12/10/2013
Can't wait for the next book!
hinataellis chapter 30 . 12/6/2013
awww hinata
Symphonic Demon chapter 30 . 12/4/2013
Ah... I'm too lazy to login...
I just wanted you to know how amazingly awesome this book was. I truly loved it. I loved the way you wrote this, the idea, everything; it was simply beautiful.
I loved the way you portrayed Naruto, Hinata and every other character.
Inari was so adorable, I loved her to death I can not wait for the next book.
Rose Tiger chapter 30 . 12/4/2013
Bummer. Naruto's leaving.
Ayrmed chapter 30 . 12/4/2013
Hope to see the story carry on again soon.
NaruHinaUntilTheEnd chapter 30 . 12/4/2013
Yay! Book 1 complete! The story is getting more interesting.
Ayrmed chapter 29 . 10/17/2013
Please write again soon. This is a cool story.
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