|Reviews for Definitely, maybe|
| kay chapter 5 . 2/4/2009
ok wut t crap is this another vampire or is it t guy 4rm breakin dawn t half lik nessie ok please write more i very curious
| HPobsesssssssed7 chapter 5 . 1/24/2009
It was good, though the cliff hanger was evil! You should definetly add more! Cheers!
| Lover of this story chapter 5 . 1/18/2009
finish it! Please, your killing me. This is the first Twilfic i've ever read, and it's wonderful. please continue.
| KelliNew chapter 5 . 1/18/2009
What a terrific story! I'm really enjoying it. Love that you balance the dialogue with descriptions of the surroundings, it really helps to "see" what's going on. Interesting to see events occuring from Nessy's POV; which you remain faithful too and don't add things that Nessy's can't know. Like that you have her be so conscious of her teeth. Some things I didn't care for, why does she call herself "Ness" which sounds like a "guy" name? Why do you think she looks "orange" in places? Seems weird, since she's described as having Bella's pre-vamp coloring. While I think overall the dialogue is good, there are a few too many endearments; less is more. I hated Bella in this story, her only child's first day of school and she can't even be bothered to ask her about it? Seems very unlike the loving Bella. Just MHO, of course. I look forward to reading more. Thanks for sharing, Kelli
| messyvampw chapter 4 . 1/13/2009
relly good keep going!
| mAcKiE-mOo chapter 4 . 1/13/2009
This i so good i cant wait til i find out what happens next
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| paaigey chapter 3 . 1/6/2009
ooh my godness you're an excellent writer. this is an amazing story so far... seriously one of the best i've read on here. good job and keep writing!
| BigDaddyBall chapter 2 . 1/5/2009
Good story so far.