Reviews for Wrong
ayac06 chapter 1 . 10/11/2013
Now I wish that Gordon too might see Bruce and Selina together in Italy at the end of TDKR, and not just Alfred. :(

Although, I disagree with your assessment that Nolan's Bruce Wayne is too damaged to move on from Batman. (Comics Bruce Wayne is completely different, I'll give you that!) He certainly made plans to move on in TDK, and even in BB, he said specifically that he intended on Batman being a temporary thing. He just thought he was the only person who could do good and inspire the people, but after the wreck Gotham becomes after TDK and TDKR, he finally acknowledges that perhaps Gotham would be better off with a different kind of hero, and gives himself permission to finally get on with his life.
CloudyDream chapter 1 . 2/1/2013
god, i loved this. really really good, your characterization is spot on.
I love your writing. If you ever log in again, give me a sign. You're awesome.
lonni chapter 1 . 1/10/2013
I loved this, I hope you'll write something else about it one day. A second chapter, a sequel, anything, I really, really like your writing. Same goes for your character's study drabbles and reviews - you're a great writer. kudos
wild-springflower chapter 1 . 7/24/2012
oh dear, well I hope Bruce doesn't get caught because of this. but still, come on, evidence Bruce, you're getting sloppy! I can just hear Alfred lecuring him now... well, hopefully Gordon will do the awesome thing, not necessarily the RIGHT thing, but the awesome thing and just let this slide... put in the grey area! although, he will have to confront Bruce about it eventually! Great job, i really enjoyed reading this!
Bayfire chapter 1 . 12/22/2011
Really good story! I wish you could write more. I would like to know if Gordon confronts Batman about this.
The Reserved Reader chapter 1 . 6/22/2011
I'm so glad I found this even if it was a little more somber than I was hoping for. The thought of Gordon figuring out Batman's true identity always intrigues me.

This was well written and I thought Gordon's introspection was true to character. It's sad to realize how alone Bruce Wayne really is. I agree with Gordon—as strange as it is to pity a billionaire, in this case it is extremely justified. The ending was great. Thanks!
leopard high in the mountains chapter 1 . 4/27/2011
I think you nailed Goordon's character perfectly. :) You did a wonderful job of building up tension; I actually got a butterfly or two in my stomach.

It would be amazing if you continued this one day, even if you just added another one more chapter to show what Gordon ultimately does about his predicament. Either way, great job! :)
ForeverRainingFire chapter 1 . 1/3/2011
Great story! It would be awesome if you decided to continue it, because it really is wonderful!
All Nightmare Long chapter 1 . 8/12/2010
I liked it! I liked it a lot! T.T
1350335 chapter 1 . 7/9/2010
Wow!

I really enjoyed reading this piece! You made a point in this story that I'd never really thought of before. If Gordon/anyone knew who Batman was behind the mask...what would they think?

I had to laugh a little at "son of a *b*tch*" Not that it was silly, oh no. It was a great first reaction. Intended to be serious, of course, but I think would say the exact same thing if I found out like that, too.

I know it's simply a oneshot, but I have to wonder what Stephens/Ramirez might do...now that they know! You had a nice bit of anxiety in this situation. I find myself shifting in my seat. Honestly I think Ramirez would be the one to weasel out and gossip to the mob (-shakes fist-). And Stephens...crazy enough to try beating up the Joker, what can't he do?

I loved your take on Gordon. He's every bit the Commissioner we all know and love (and TRUST). I wonder...do you think he would confront Bruce? Or at least tell him something along the lines "I know who you are, I won't tell anyone...go fight some mobsters"? :D

Imagine how Batman would feel! D:

Anyways, wonderful piece! I had a fun time reading it!

Keep on writing! (You're great at it!)

-SBH
Elerrina Star chapter 1 . 5/2/2010
Bravo! *cheers*
I absolutly *love* Gordon based fics, and this one was great! I'd love to see this story made longer, eventually! (But first I want more "Foundations"! Pwease?) :)
Thoughts Of A Shadow chapter 1 . 4/20/2010
That was uber good! i liked it a lot, and it would be awesome if you did a different story on how Gordon delt with it the next time he faces Bats.

But I'll make you a deal.

You update 'Foundations'...

and I'll make 'Playing a Game With the Bat' into a multi chappie. Like, a really long one...

But I''ll probably do it anyway...

So, plz update on both stories!

TOAS
The Heroine With 1000 Faces chapter 1 . 1/12/2010
Great, as always. I'm the anonymous "Vicky" by the way ;)
The Illegible chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
I always try not to fav and run, but am rather tired right now so probably won't be super in depth. That said, this fic was stylistically awesome, full of lovely details (loved the family speculations/Jim's relationship with his kids), and realistic characterization all around. Also loved your representation of Ramirez, plus how she ultimately wasn't able to confess or make up for her betrayals. It sounds terribly mean and pessimistic to me saying as much, but...the situation just makes /sense/. The contrast between Batman's spikes and the manilla folder was also highly effective. Just a great story. :-)
Qoheleth chapter 1 . 12/9/2009
Dear Restaurant:

Well, not absolutely *no* family. He does have Dick, after... oh. Right.

Sincerely,

Qoheleth
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