Reviews for Balance Point
Emmy-loo chapter 3 . 1/13/2009
I am very quickly falling in love with this story. While the Yassen plot line has been done before, you inject a new cynicism into it with Alex's point of view. Too often in fanfic he's all-too-willing to accept that Yassen is his friend based upon the fact that maybe his dad was friends with him once.

Your characterization is excellent as well. I really loved the part with Mrs. Jones at the beginning of this chapter, about the heels. Perfect. Keep up the good work! I'll be looking for new chapters soon!

tzoomi chapter 3 . 1/13/2009
génial! yassen va très bientôt voir alex ,non?
gupard chapter 3 . 1/13/2009
even better! thank you!
tzoomi chapter 2 . 1/9/2009
la suite! la suite!
Bella chapter 2 . 1/9/2009
This is really well written. I love all the stories that have Yassen in them but there are only a few really really good ones and i reckon this is going to be one of them. Keep up the good work.
tsodium chapter 2 . 1/7/2009
Nicely and succinctly done.
crossMyheartHope2Spy chapter 2 . 1/7/2009
heheheh yassen is still alive!

ninety9 chapter 2 . 1/7/2009
Yes please do get the action in. Keep writing and update soon!
tzoomi chapter 2 . 1/7/2009
j'adore yassen et ton histoire est super! félicitations et donne nous bientôt la suite
gupard chapter 2 . 1/7/2009
its genious! I love yassen a lot! thank you for this story!
crossMyheartHope2Spy chapter 1 . 1/5/2009

this is so good my heart is pumping

wat is going to happen next

how old is alex? y is he a loose cannon were does he live?

sry about all the questions..

Aelyra chapter 1 . 1/5/2009
O! this story sounds really interesting! put up the next chapter soon! :)
GoodIsGood chapter 1 . 1/5/2009
Update :)
sahara chapter 1 . 1/5/2009
cool your story! the dangerous man is yassen,isn't he?

continue please!
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