Reviews for Nocturnalist
Silvergrotto chapter 14 . 12/23/2013
I didn't suspect Ky at all! This is such a great story and I can't wait for the next chapter. By the way, you said that Zach was a level three mage, but to become level two you need a paladin (I'm only elaborating on this because in a story I'm writing, Zach is working his way toward level two, so I know how fun it is to create a paladin for someone :) As a HUGE fan of this story, I'm kindly asking if you'd give it a shot, making a paladin for him). The best of inspiration to you for your next chapter!
Silvergrotto chapter 12 . 12/23/2013
Twice in here, when you wrote Marlin, it came out as "Marling", I'm sure it was just a typo, but it made me imagine Emily calling Marlin "Marlin Darlin'" I love how Marlin was acting, trying to make Emily comfortable and everything, I hope there's more of that at some point! :) I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Silvergrotto chapter 8 . 12/23/2013
If you haven't already named the baby, Abalone is a pretty girl's name (it's a type of shell) and you probably won't use these, but I love the boy names Alec and Tobias. If no one has told you what Marlin looks like, he has brown eyes and wavy/curly brown hair with a lime tint (plus light green skin). I can't wait to keep reading, this is a great story!
Silvergrotto chapter 6 . 12/23/2013
I love how Zach's clueless about Darth Vader. I was just wondering, how would Marlin and Emilt rule Aquatania from Ravenswood? To me, it seems like they should live on Aldenmor and visit Ravenswood once in a while...just saying... LOVE THE STORY THOUGH! :)
Silvergrotto chapter 1 . 12/23/2013
Ooooh! This is really good so far! I can't wait to read the upcoming chapters! :D
Alex S chapter 14 . 11/29/2013
I love it! I can't wait to read what happens next!
Guest chapter 1 . 10/26/2013
When is the next fic coming out?
marlinluver chapter 1 . 10/26/2013
can em and marlin have a sex scene? please?
Layla chapter 14 . 10/26/2013
Okay, so is Ky evil then? And what happened to Ivy? Is she a mage?
guest chapter 14 . 10/26/2013
I'm interested to see where you're taking this. *gushes* AVALON IS SUCH A SOAP OPERA
Mamabear chapter 14 . 10/26/2013
omgomgomgomg keep going!
Guest chapter 13 . 9/1/2013
It been past 2weeks already!Geez people needs to keep track of time.
Gothic-Princess-77 chapter 13 . 8/19/2013
I really like this story. I'm sad to see it hasn't been updated in so long.
dawnshadow chapter 13 . 6/13/2013
I LOVED IT! Cant wait for the next capter!
Amalthea-Shine chapter 13 . 1/2/2013
This story is getting really good. I hope you finish it. I wanna find out what happens to everyone.
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