|Reviews for Crash|
| Lottiekoda chapter 1 . 2/28
I love this premise, the idea of the characters getting into an accident. It is so different from the dangers they normally face, and it really does seem dim in comparison to fighting the wars. However, I think that this personal, and slow death that would have occurred for both Ed and Mustang without Mustang's courage to save Ed is almost more frightening and threatening. I love how this story illustrated how much Ed and Roy care for each other, without making it completely romantic, sappy, or unrealistic to their characters. Thanks for writing this, my suggestion for this fic would be to include Al! Also, perhaps Ed would be a little more badass/flashy in getting them out of the car/healing Mustang. After all, he did save his own life when he himself was impaled by a metal beam! Thanks again for writing this, it was beautifully unique and excellently written!
| Sagacious Strix chapter 1 . 2/26
This was unbelievably gut-wrenching. It was so beautifully written and the imagery is astonishing.
| meladi1 chapter 1 . 2/24
Why are all your stories soo good
| sierra.steinbrecher chapter 1 . 1/7
Wow. This has really great detail.
| Doppler Effect chapter 1 . 1/3
I'l remember this story every time I think it's a little nippy outside...
| Beautiful Rain Droplet chapter 1 . 1/1
That was very very good. It was captivating, suspenseful, sentimental, and amazing.
| StarTrail chapter 1 . 11/9/2013
so gald that everyone made it out alive...i thought havoc and roy were dead men...
beautifully written and realistic, that's all i've got to say.
| MadManWithATimeTravellingBox chapter 1 . 11/5/2013
The last line made me laugh.
and then I got trampled by my chair because I was leaning on two legs, you ass. I should sue you! :3
| uehara-tsubasa chapter 1 . 10/8/2013
I LOVE THIS SO MUCH.
So gooood. I just keep coming back and rereading it at random times...
There's nothin' like some near-death experiences, blood, and Parental!RoyEd to get you happy again! :D
Dude, you rock.
It is also a good sign of writing skillz when you can go through a whole story without describing Ed's golden eyes or hair.
| royriza4ever chapter 1 . 8/17/2013
Stop being so good! Actually, scratch that. If you stop being good, then I wouldn't get to read this amazingness...
| xXFantasyVSRealityxX chapter 1 . 8/6/2013
My god this was good! I love how well you write the relationship between Roy and Ed. I can actually feel their bond as I read your stories.
| Miss Light Bright chapter 1 . 8/4/2013
Loved it! Great job!
| DrummerDancer chapter 1 . 7/4/2013
| sub.C chapter 1 . 6/29/2013
AAAWWWWWWWW omg omg OMG... for a second, I really really feared Roy would DIE! F...ing hell... heart rate 180 bpm :-S...!
[And still (for the third day now) I'm couch-potato-ing with my cold and my cough and my temperature, surrounded by a steadily growing mountain of paper tissues, due to my steadily running nose :P... and it's such a pain... BUT... this fic is so perfect in this situation ;)! Cause afterwards you're like - c'mon, at least you're lying on a cosy couch... and you're NOT jammed below a driver's seat with a stabbed Roy on top... and it's warm... and stuff... yeah ;). So stop complaining, it could be muuuuuuuch worse :P. Just for the record.]
Great fic! :o)
| Dreamer372 chapter 1 . 6/26/2013
*Starts crying* I-I loved it! It was so cute!