Reviews for Senior Agent
ValerieRichards chapter 1 . 4/12/2011
Interesting. And coincidently, my birthday is April 9th
Sparkiebunny chapter 32 . 4/9/2010
Wow, it's crazy...I've read and re-read this story like a billion times, but just realized I never reviewed! Sorry about that!

I absolutely loved this fic. The characterizations were wonderful and every chapter was extremely well-written. You managed to introduce an outside character without it being irritating or dull. Quite the opposite, in fact! I found your OC's very appealing and you wrote their roles very well.

Excellent job! Congratulations on a stellar story! :)

N600XL chapter 32 . 2/18/2010

Your Writing content is superior and it kept me interested. I have one suggestion, there is one specific phrase that you overuse, "he was asleep before his head hit the pillow". I think that if you did not use it that often, it would have been a little bit better. Other than that, you did a great job!

Keep Writing!


crokettsgirl chapter 32 . 11/4/2009
This was a very good story. I'm so glad that things are better with Gibbs and all is normal with the team. But I was really happy that Andrea is back and that Tony has someone to share his life with. Great job. Sue
crokettsgirl chapter 31 . 11/4/2009
Nice cliff hanger. I enjoyed the chapter. I was glad that Tony was alright and that Andrea was able to stay with him. I'm Also glad that Gibbs and the team were able to have their time with Tony. Great job. sue
crokettsgirl chapter 30 . 11/4/2009
Sorry it took so long to read this. I'm so glad they found Tony and he's going to be alright. I enjoyed the flashback and to finally find out how the two met. Also his promise and I guess I'll have to wait for the next chapter to see how they fell in love. Now with the whole team coming it's going to be like Gibbs said , alot of questions. excellent job. Sue
scousemuz1k chapter 32 . 10/27/2009
Congrats on reaching the end!It was a marathon, well done for having the stamina to complete the task and giving us so much enjoyment.
scousemuz1k chapter 31 . 10/26/2009
Another great chapter- another cliffie. Can't wait to see how it all ends up.
lot56 chapter 30 . 10/2/2009
Had a spare couple of hours and just read the whole freaking story, and it was AWESOME! I enjoyed the action, the agnst between Gibbs/Tony. I hope for a happy ending, and a headslap. Toss in an epilogue? see Tony married in the future with 2.5 kids and a house with a white fence, or does she leave him 2 months later for the pool boy? Anyway, update soon!
angeleyes46 chapter 30 . 10/1/2009
keep up the great work.
crokettsgirl chapter 29 . 9/18/2009
I finally got past the login and I'm back on! Sarah this was a great chapter. A lot of answers. I loved how Gibbs went after Ivan and Thompson went along with the coat on the didn't understand when Collins and Cooper were in the sqadroom. I know that Cooper is the mole and they are arresting him. But I didn't know about collins, I know Collins was the one that was deep and had to hide. I'm glad they found Tony but I hope he is alright and that was a great cliffhanger. Great job. Sue
BnBfanatic chapter 29 . 9/18/2009
Ph thats a good cliffie! You better [lan on updating fast! LOL
BnBfanatic chapter 12 . 9/17/2009
I love your story but just have one thing to make u aware of just to make it even better. You repeat the names of each character way too much, here's an for example - it isnt word for word from your actual story it's just an example.- "Gibbs came into the room stunned, then Gibbs turned around to...etc" where as you could replace their names once in a while with he, she, they, etc. U can see it in Ch 12 - look at bottom section under NCIS seperation. You can just see all the names by just looking at it. this is positive feedback tho cuz your story is very exciting and I love it!
zats chapter 29 . 9/17/2009
Egads what a cliffhanger...Finding Tony only to be left on his status. Well written with great dialog. Update soon.
crokettsgirl chapter 28 . 9/9/2009
Sarah sorry it took so long to read. I love how you did this getting Matt and Andrea involved I just hope it's not to late and they can finds Tony , fast. Gibbs still doesn't know how the two met though she did say she loved him to Gibbe. very curious. But the pieces are coming to together. Excellent chapter. Sue
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