Reviews for Rise of the Fallen Angels
GhoulVampireGirl chapter 1 . 3/29
My constructive critazism is u dont need. And if i spelled critazism wrong dont say a thing! ;D
nekogirl017 chapter 1 . 11/11/2014
Jutsu?...You like Naruto, don't you? Not a flame (this story is really good!) Just an observation.
Unknown2112015 chapter 8 . 8/3/2014
(Cring), wait did you say version 2, hope it is out for I have fallen for this story and gotten addicted to it.
Unknown2112015 chapter 7 . 8/3/2014
Interesting, hungry for ...look another chapter. (Drooling).

This is good work and to those that do not like it can go and kiss a active light socket.
Unknown2112015 chapter 6 . 8/3/2014
How can one be jealous if one is sitting on his face while the other is riding him, then at climax and a short rest they swap places. There goes you answer.

Could not resist. Good work, hungry for more, o look there is another chapter for me.
Unknown2112015 chapter 5 . 8/3/2014
Interesting. O look another chapter to feast on. (Drooling hitting the next button.)
Unknown2112015 chapter 4 . 8/3/2014
Interesting, o look another chapter to fill my hunger. I like this story can not wait to see what you are going to do next.
Unknown2112015 chapter 3 . 8/3/2014
Interesting. O look, I hunger for more and there is one more.
Unknown2112015 chapter 2 . 8/3/2014
Nice, this is interesting. O look there is another chapter to fill my hunger for more.
Unknown2112015 chapter 1 . 8/3/2014
Interesting, I like to see more of this. O look, there is another chapter, (Drooling) Have to read it. LOL
cerberus328 chapter 8 . 5/10/2014
awesome please update soon!
The Observant Reader chapter 6 . 2/26/2014
A matrix quote? Seriously?
FallenLucifersAngel chapter 2 . 7/29/2013
**** he done goofed lets see more.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/17/2013
This has good potential but your an inexperienced writer, go onto the ff web and look for excellent written stories, see how they write and what not. This story your writing has a SHIT ton of potential and a great story line but half way through you almost lost me. I'm only saying this because I want you to learn how to write better because If you write hella good people will go on your page to look at your other stories, keep it up bro
Half wolf chapter 1 . 2/27/2013
Lol
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