Reviews for Believe
BlueJae3 chapter 36 . 9/1/2016
I liked it up until Suri became evil...
BlueJae3 chapter 2 . 9/1/2016
Only ch 2 and you already have me in tears...poor Raphie, I just want to give him and Mikey a hug.
Iwatchthewatchers chapter 29 . 2/22/2015
When exactly was a homeless girl supposed to learn how to drive? She's been on the streets forever...
Iwatchthewatchers chapter 17 . 2/22/2015
Ok Splinter bugs me so bad especially in this story! Leo could've apologized forever ago if Splinter wasn't messing with everyone's minds all the time. He's supposed to be all wise and whatever but he honestly does more harm than good most of the time. Not that it's your fault I just never liked Splinters character in general, nothing wrong with the way you are portraying him. Love the story though :)
Tomboy chapter 8 . 8/22/2014
I love this story. It should be turn into a movie.
tmntfan4ever chapter 36 . 8/6/2014
YAY! SURI THE BITCH IS DEAD! this is awesome!
tmntfan4ever chapter 26 . 8/5/2014
Defiant Nefelibata chapter 9 . 10/26/2013
Oooh! Suspense!
Cannas chapter 2 . 5/20/2013
I should stop reading your stuff. It's always making me cry. I love the 2nd chapter!
Aiyaki chapter 26 . 4/28/2013
da fug! I really was starting to think you were ganna be nice and give raph a happy edding. Freak man really Suri c'mon! Jeez you barely show her to begin with then now sudenly she's evil just like shaun Flipping dolphin flugger dung! Its ruin now. you write wonderfully, but really even satin desurse love. should have known...jeez..
teenagejustice chapter 4 . 9/2/2012
Oh my God! I haven't finished yet but with this chapter I was drowning in the fluff! The whole time while I was reading this I kept saying in this really high pitched voice, "Oh my God it's so CUTE!"
Moon Dahee chapter 36 . 6/7/2012
Ok, the end was a bit rash... It could use an epilogue There is a pending conversation between Raph, Leo and Splinter...

Also, I think Raph trusted Suri and accepted her help too easily when he tends to be distrustful... He even believed what she said about his brothers wanting him to be the Shredder...

But I enjoy the story, anyway, and you write really well :) I hope to read more of your work
Moon Dahee chapter 27 . 6/7/2012
Well, maybe she's completely evil? I don't know; I still have a feeling that she's not... But I wish she were because I don't like her xDDD

Good story, by the way. I love how you portray the turtles... Maybe I said this before in another review? I don't remember now... xD
Moon Dahee chapter 26 . 6/7/2012
Yes, I didn't like her since the beginning... Now I have a reason xDDD But she's probably doing what she's doing for a reason. I have a theory :)
Moon Dahee chapter 1 . 6/5/2012
You really are a good writer . I find it amazing that you are only 16! You know how capture the characters' personalities well. I already want to read your story nonstop, but I have to go to bed. Tomorrow I have an exam TT
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