Reviews for Finding Naoto
hdgjgdkmgcj chapter 1 . 11/18/2016
Excellent! Heart warming. Loved it!
The Anguished One chapter 1 . 7/10/2014
Ah! I love your stories. You do a great job of getting inside Naoto's head. This is so adorable...
Yoss chapter 1 . 7/7/2014
Roxius, you are one of these people NO ONE want in their review section. Ugh.

But anyway, wonderful little story, I really love it. Thank you!
Frosty Wolf chapter 1 . 1/4/2014
Very amusing.
Deedlit-Murata chapter 1 . 10/7/2013
My heart is impacted after reading this, I Love how you express Naoto's POV, amazing. I love this pairing !
Vandenbz chapter 1 . 1/13/2010
This was just beautiful. I can only pray that you make an epilogue for this that is just as good. Keep the stories coming!
Formidonis chapter 1 . 6/22/2009
Perfect characterisation Flawless execution a great read. It’s as simple as that. I really enjoyed this.
Azurerin chapter 1 . 2/18/2009
This is quite good! It's just too short, at least for me, I think...
Mikachiru chapter 1 . 2/3/2009
NaotoXMC/Souji ftw! Yeah, I love this pairing. Naoto is just so cute, especially during the Christmas eve event. Speaking of that, the
yarra chapter 1 . 1/30/2009
Aw, Nao-chan...
Jophiel chapter 1 . 1/28/2009
Very nice and fluffy. This should be the bonus content in Persona 4 FES.

I really liked how you drew the parallel on fortune at the end. It was so fitting to this story.
Titan6 chapter 1 . 1/28/2009
I think this is a great representation of Naoto. Impressive vocabulary, by the way ;) I enjoyed reading this - very adorable.
Larc chapter 1 . 1/23/2009
man, I dont know how you can make Naoto not OOC at all, eventhough you used a first person view... Its really good, continue it will ya?
Roxius chapter 1 . 1/21/2009

...But you wrote a good story, so I applaud you. I'm not critizing you for what you like, I'm just stating my opinion towards the two of them as a couple.

Keep up the good work!
DEADxGONE chapter 1 . 1/8/2009
You have no idea how much this made my night. XD

Very well written. It sounded just like Naoto. D It was easy to picture her voice in my head as I read. And though I usually hate first-person, it worked quite nicely in this case.

Are you planning on continuing this further? Though I suppose it would be hard without going too much off-plot and such.

Another reason why I suppose there isn't too many Persona fics.

And as Goldamon said, there is a serious lack of 'em. XD Which is very disappointing, because I rather enjoy the series.

Kudos to you. D
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