|Reviews for Torn|
| Guest chapter 2 . 5/20/2018
rukia and ichigo doesent love each other bra
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/20/2018
funny ichigo can't even damage aizen clothes and renji and byakuya are weaklings
| MajinTreenotlog chapter 34 . 3/15/2018
Perhaps re-labelling this to be an adventure/tragedy is an order? Very borderline M rating for the story. Some of the violent/guresome scenes would be considered too much by those with lesser stomachs. I liked the story, until 20yr time skip, killing ichigo's family, love life, and then ichigo himself. Saving nelliel just to kill her off in the end, quite savage. The story became a bit harder to follow post20yr time-skip due to all the chaos and the OCs. I'm surprised you chose to have stark stay with the losers in los noches, especially as Stark was the most laid-back/not bloodthirsty of the espada, his closest contenders being Nelliel and Ulquiorra. It was a good read, despite the whole story getting flipped on its head when ichigo joined isshin in the soul king's realm. Still, the romance parts were fluffy and definitely had me attached to the pairs, until most if not all of them were broken up. Pm my account if ya wanna chat.
| SlashingMoon chapter 34 . 10/19/2017
maaan. the ending was really sad to me. i mean after all that happend ichigo doesn't remember her and rukia is like 'totally haven't met you before'
| Crack-jouchan chapter 32 . 4/15/2016
Ohhhh, so that's what happened to Orihime. Interesting! ...and she's not hiding her true self so much anymore, and so she's being purposely spiteful. Hahahaha!
I really can't get over how much Wonderwice has changed. He used to be a drooly kid! Now he's like so cool and stoic. It's just so different!
Wow, the opponents keep changing, and the fights keep going on. And oh my, it's the Vizards! Have they come to Soul Society? And along with Hector! OH YAY! Save the day!
| Crack-jouchan chapter 31 . 4/15/2016
OH! Orihime! I was wondering what had happened to her. Unlike the rest, she's human afterall. Sounds like she's been living in Soul Society, though.
Waheeee! I never thought this would be possible, but Kira is so cool. And wow, Soi beat death! And NELLLL! She's back! Everything's better with Nel.
I get the feeling Gin's gonna pull some heroic crap and get himself killed. He feels like that kind of guy.
| Crack-jouchan chapter 29 . 4/15/2016
... I kind of feel like facepalming everytime Aizen says something to the effect of 'Ichigo will come to me.' He sounds like a desperate jilted lover. ...Nevermind, that's gross.
I suppose I can't blame Rukia for being so mad. It was Ichigo's fault for being so impulsive and going after Aizen even after everyone explicitly told him not to.
Lil' Hector's a confused teen going through his rebellious phase, it seems. Or his Hollow is. Oh...! Is he a Vizard? That's interesting. Heh, Hollow and Shinigami... Should have figured that out.
| Crack-jouchan chapter 28 . 4/15/2016
I KNEW IT! It's a kid, it's a kid, it's an adorable adorable kid! Awwwwww. He sounds so adorable with blue eyes and black hair.
*snicker* the Espada sounds like some weird opera group now... Though I feel sorry for Starrk cause he's a cool guy. Aww.
| Crack-jouchan chapter 25 . 4/15/2016
Aizen, you bastard. ...and yet I feel sorry for him, ugh. A broken idealist. Damn my soft heart. All of it is so sad.
...and of course, damnit. Technically he's a Soul Reaper who got turned into a human, now he's a Soul Reaper again... Well. I guess it's not that bad. Yahoo, the badass Kurosaki family!
| Crack-jouchan chapter 24 . 4/15/2016
... Soi is such a tsundere. So much tsundere.
Ohhhh, their past! Damn if they aren't adorable (how many times have I said this...?). Of course it'd take nothing else but death to separate them! But in the world of Bleach, death is just a slap on the wrist~ (...usually) *sniffle* they reunited! Finally!
Oh my, it was Urahara that found Soi and Grimmy! What a coincidence. Aww, and the paralells she draws between her and Grimmy and Yoruichi and Urahara makes both pairings adorable. Seriously, every pairing you have here is so well suited!
Oh my... Isshin! And the Kurosakis! Oh my god, poor Ichigo...
| Crack-jouchan chapter 23 . 4/14/2016
Wow, Shiro actually did what many thought was impossible: he pissed off Orihime. The Inoue Orihime. So she's secretly a badass! That's so cool. These two are pretty perfect for each other. Hahahaha! Inoue's idea of 'revenge' is awesome! She can be cool when she wants to~
I wonder what Aizen's up to now...
| Crack-jouchan chapter 22 . 4/14/2016
I just checked out Zommari's Resurreccion, and I can't stop laughing because he's wearing a tutu. A freaking tutu. What a joker!
Soi did what she could. Awww, they are so adorable, trying to protect one another like that. Hehe. But considering what they are now... Their lives must have come to quite the untimely end.
Ooooh, Hichigo and Orihime! That will be interesting!
| Crack-jouchan chapter 21 . 4/14/2016
Yahoooo! Nel is speaking again! Awww, that prep talk with Ulqui fixed her right up! How sweet.
Ooooh, and Hichigo and Orihime...?! That's interesting! Though honestly, what's up with her? Is it Aizen?
Grimmy shoved his gigai into his locker... HAHAHAHAHA! Oh my god. His locker. Goddamnitttt... He's hilarious without even trying to. Yahoo! He meets Soi again! More meetings, more meetings! They are adorable together. He can't stop calling her Shaolin, eh?
Zommari is such a jerk. But they'll make it through! I believe it!
| Crack-jouchan chapter 20 . 4/14/2016
HAHAHAHA! Kaien as teacher... Weeeeell, he's honestly the best one out of the Shinigami stationed here. Heck, he's an ex-Arrancar and his savior's Ichigo!
And... arguing with Rukia? Oh my god! He reunited with her! Yayyyy! I'm so glad for them! Awww, and Ulqui and Nel... So much fluffiness in this chapter.
| Crack-jouchan chapter 19 . 4/14/2016
*sweatdrop* Well, ain't this chaotic... Eheh. Soul Society's messed up, we don't know what's happened in Hueco Mundo cause screw them, the Human World seems pretty quiet but that's probably gonna change soon...
Ahahaha, despite all that has happened, Nel still has her attitude! And wow, Urahara sure heard of it quickly... Heh, Yama-chan's really shot himself in the leg badly! Go Urahara!~ Save the cute darling kitty!
Also... HAHAHAHA! Going to school... Weeeell, it'll be an experience *snickers*