Reviews for Torn |
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![]() ![]() ![]() ...I really don't like that you killed Ikkaku and Ken-chan, along with not really describing Hecter's mask. other then that _ Definite Fav, though this is the only complete fic i've read based on bleach |
![]() ![]() ![]() :( I'll take being compared with Jaso in terms of writing as a compliment of the highest order. Thank you so much for the kind words. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Shikamaru says the same thing when he is fighting Hidan 1/1, in naruto Shippudom. |
![]() ![]() HURK. YOU AND JASO TIE FOR WORST FIC |
![]() ![]() ![]() You killed Shirou-chan! NO! That was cruel. But anyways, I'm liking the story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I found this fic more or less thanks to the recommendation MatsuMama put in her profile, and I must say, this is one helluva good fic. I admit that the constant cliffhangers made me grit my teeth once or a hundred times, but it was totally worth it. The characters were all in-character, considering the situations you put them through and the plot itself is very interesting and believable. The new Espada you came up with were all wonderful and I would very much love to actually see how they would look. I really loved Grim and Soifon's background was very original and well thought-out. Seperating Hishigo from Ichigo was a good idea too, in my opinion. I am running out of sufficient praise for this. I'm just gonna finish with a big fat thanks for writing this amazing piece of fanfiction |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm so glad you decided to do a sequel, and I really look forward to it! This was a wonderful fic, and you really did it justice in the end -Flames |
![]() ![]() Well I guess a cliched ending is the perfect way to wrap up this cliched, predictable mess of a story. |
![]() ![]() The ending was a bit fast and cliche, but other than that, Great Story! Hope you get to 10 reviews! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, this was amazing. It took me three days to read this (not continuously obviously, too lazy for that _) and I do not regret it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is the best. But how was Kenney killed? I didn't like that. Also, what happand to Yachiru? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay I finished and I gotta say I loved it. I look forward to the two sequel not sequel things. 5/5 |
![]() ![]() ![]() okay sorry I haven't review in awhile. Been busy. I liked this chapter but yeah the whole good guy save thing did get old but you saved with a good battle in betwean them. I liked Hector coming in to save his mom part the most tho. Good job _. You'll see me again after chapter 33 |
![]() ![]() A cliché Bleach ending, but still a great story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, I've read the whole story and it's very, very, very sad. Ichig dies and is reborn. Neliel dies, Hitsugaya dies, Hinamori becomes evil and dies, Halibel has sort of a change of heart and dies. So like I said, very sad. But, it was an amazingly good story and I'm definitely going to read the sequels. Good luck! |