Reviews for Torn
Luckydo0g42 chapter 34 . 9/16/2009
...I really don't like that you killed Ikkaku and Ken-chan, along with not really describing Hecter's mask.

other then that _ Definite Fav, though this is the only complete fic i've read based on bleach
jazzpha chapter 34 . 9/11/2009
:(

I'll take being compared with Jaso in terms of writing as a compliment of the highest order. Thank you so much for the kind words.
Luckydo0g42 chapter 25 . 9/10/2009
Shikamaru says the same thing when he is fighting Hidan 1/1, in naruto Shippudom.
Guest chapter 34 . 9/9/2009
HURK.

YOU AND JASO TIE FOR WORST FIC
Grassina3 chapter 27 . 9/6/2009
You killed Shirou-chan! NO! That was cruel. But anyways, I'm liking the story!
Nethiel Nessime chapter 34 . 8/27/2009
I found this fic more or less thanks to the recommendation MatsuMama put in her profile, and I must say, this is one helluva good fic.

I admit that the constant cliffhangers made me grit my teeth once or a hundred times, but it was totally worth it. The characters were all in-character, considering the situations you put them through and the plot itself is very interesting and believable. The new Espada you came up with were all wonderful and I would very much love to actually see how they would look.

I really loved Grim and Soifon's background was very original and well thought-out. Seperating Hishigo from Ichigo was a good idea too, in my opinion.

I am running out of sufficient praise for this. I'm just gonna finish with a big fat thanks for writing this amazing piece of fanfiction
attu chapter 34 . 8/24/2009
I'm so glad you decided to do a sequel, and I really look forward to it! This was a wonderful fic, and you really did it justice in the end

-Flames
Guest chapter 34 . 8/12/2009
Well I guess a cliched ending is the perfect way to wrap up this cliched, predictable mess of a story.
oxygen deprived chapter 34 . 8/12/2009
The ending was a bit fast and cliche, but other than that, Great Story! Hope you get to 10 reviews!
Dominican Kitsune chapter 34 . 8/4/2009
Wow, this was amazing. It took me three days to read this (not continuously obviously, too lazy for that _) and I do not regret it.
Zexionthefirst chapter 34 . 7/28/2009
This is the best. But how was Kenney killed? I didn't like that. Also, what happand to Yachiru?
Heronkai chapter 34 . 7/28/2009
Okay I finished and I gotta say I loved it. I look forward to the two sequel not sequel things. 5/5
Heronkai chapter 32 . 7/27/2009
okay sorry I haven't review in awhile. Been busy. I liked this chapter but yeah the whole good guy save thing did get old but you saved with a good battle in betwean them. I liked Hector coming in to save his mom part the most tho. Good job _. You'll see me again after chapter 33
OZ chapter 34 . 7/24/2009
A cliché Bleach ending, but still a great story.
Dente Lunae chapter 34 . 7/23/2009
Okay, I've read the whole story and it's very, very, very sad. Ichig dies and is reborn. Neliel dies, Hitsugaya dies, Hinamori becomes evil and dies, Halibel has sort of a change of heart and dies. So like I said, very sad. But, it was an amazingly good story and I'm definitely going to read the sequels. Good luck!
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