Reviews for Torn |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I’m not sure how to put my thoughts into words about this last chapter. Things seemed to have a nice closure with most of the people, it’s not like everything ended in misery. That ending bit was very unexpected however. So Ichigo’s dead…but not dead? Tarou huh? Interesting. You have no idea how much I have enjoyed reading this fanfic! You managed to create a story that was always new and fun to read, whenever you updated I would just grin with excitement! I loved reading it! And I’m curious what the sequel will be about and what characters you will have in there. Will Tarou show up? Or will it just be Grimmjow and Soifon? I’m not sure. Anyway. I’m still very excited! Keep writing! You’re amazing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() (Tear tear) Poor Ulquiorra! Nel is really dead? (Cries) Why did she have to die! That was probably the saddest part so far watching (I guess reading) as Ulquiorra gave up, and it makes me just cry thinking that he was hurt so badly! I love Ulquiorra! His emotions developed so much because of Nel and to have that all taken away is just so sad. WHAT? Ichigo freaking died! How the hell is that even possible! Ichigo never dies! No way no way no way no way (Goes in denial) You’re joking…right? ICHIGO! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ulquiorra! He saved Yumichika! But it made me mad that Yumichika hates Ulquiorra, plus it seemed like Yumichika is just bitter about everything, but I guess he sort of has a reason to be. 0_0 Grimmjow! He better freaking live or I’m gonna be mad! I always love it when Shiro fights! It was depressing when Aron beat the crap out of him! Poor Shiro. Damn! Now Kira and Matsumoto! All of the shinigami are getting their asses kicked! Lol, I feel bad for them. But then again, that often happens right before they win! Okay, Ajax is just a plain ass! That was really cruel to Nel! I can’t believe I’m surprised though. Most of the time, the arrancars are just evil by nature or whatever. But still! That was beyond evil! (Gr) Is Nel really dead? Oh my god! Héctor! He’s back! Ooh! This is just getting better and better! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really awesome fights in this chapter! Nicely described and as always very interesting! Momo is getting more and more freaky! Seriously! Wow! She scares me…. I feel bad for Gin…actually, I almost feel bad for everyone that is having issues during this time! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well I really enjoyed the story but that was a bit of a downer ending. Thanks for writing it. I'm looking forward to the sequels. |
![]() ![]() a really bad story, if i knew it was gonna end like this i would've never read it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why the hell does Ichigo get so constantly knocked out, making that person seem extremely overpowered, or Ichigo extremely underpowered? |
![]() ![]() ![]() great work loved it can't wait to read the sequel anyway, all the best silentshadow55 |
![]() ![]() ![]() there's not really a lot of Soi fan and Grimmjow in your fanfic so why put it under there characters? why not just Ichigo and Aizen? Great story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ulquiorra finally shows emotions! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hm...So Ichigo's shinigami soul died, but his soul is back? I'm lost...and 'Tarou'? I wonder where that draws influence from...? I'll be looking forward to both sequels, for sure, I want to see the growth of Hector as a character and where Ichigo ends...If he's still bound to the Human World in soul, does he not require konso to be sent to Soul Society? Will his powers return? Does Rukia stay with the pineapple-head? And as mentioned above, if Ichigo returned in soul, what happened to Kago? Wonder who will perform Ichigo's konso..And Ulqiorra...hm, re armed and feeling better, it seems. SO MANY QUESTIONS. Waiting, waiting, waiting... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nicely done. I have to wonder how much Unohana told the rest of the Gotei 13 about the sordid history of the Kurosaki clan when all was said and done. I can hardly wait to see what you do from here on out - it's definitely a rather bleak situation, what with the tensions still running high. Oh, Rukia. She's not that tall, she must be brimming over with guilt and angst at this point! Heh. Now that you've had a chance to take a deep breath, moar! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() There are a lot of loose ends, although the most important goal has been reached. It was surprising for me that Shiro survived Ichigo's spirit death and Ichigo was reincarnated as an adult, but who knows where the boundaries of possibility lie in fiction. About Grimmjow - he probably won't be able to stay in soul society should something happen to Unohana and he cannot go back to Hueco Mundo because of Soi Fon and their child. It seems that the vizards would be the best choice in this case, if they accepted Hector's family. Thanks for writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww...that was a good epilogue... I'm glad Ulquiorra is getting out of his slump...even if he does have to return to Hueco Mundo. Hector is amazingly intuitive for his age, but then again he probably gets that from both of his parents. I do like the lead-in that you set up for the rest of the sequel when the Shinigami are heading for revenge. A big D'Aw moment to the very last scene with Rukia and the reincarnation of Ichigo...that was something I wasn't really expecting...although I have an inkling that Urahara is holding on to more information that he's letting out (as usual for him). I'm looking forward to the sequel(s) to this story! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() O my gosh, I can't believe it's over! And Ichigo's not dead... technically. And the name Tarou... I used an online Japanese dictionary and thought it was interesting how his name could mean { Be proud/be lonely labor} or rice field. I like the rice field one better. Kind of like Strawberry, but not as cool. I can't wait to read the sequels, or the intermezzo and then the sequel. Traitor-Hero |