| Reviews for Torn |
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   Dente Lunae chapter 1 . 7/14/2009 Wow! That's a good start, having everyone hate Ichigo. I'm looking forward to the following chapters |
| Temple117 chapter 32 . 7/13/2009 At last, the duel we've all been waiting for begins! But will Ichigo's training really be enough? The suspense is killing me P And then there's Hector! I did NOT expect him to be able to stop the Quinta, but then again, look at his parents ;) Great chapter! |
| Grinja chapter 32 . 7/13/2009 Looks like this is heading towards a grand finale. I can't wait. |
| Satosky chapter 32 . 7/13/2009 Still supporting Ichi-Rukia lol and loving the story can't wait for the battle between Ichigo and Aizen. |
| DarkJason chapter 32 . 7/13/2009 BADASS, BADASS, BADASS CHAPTER! There's SO much action going on, it's making me lose my mind! The vizards appearing, Hector appearing, with his badass appearance and Soifon's shocked look at her son, and the final battle with Ichigo! There's also some tragedies in the chapter, but I know everything will be all right when Ichigo wins! I can't wait! BTW, I noticed you put Saika Aron from one of your older stories "Against All Odds" BTW great story, to this story as the Tercera Espada, genius! Also thanks for bringing Ulquiorra back, I missed him! And I also found hilarious that Orihime half-healed Yumichika and lied to him, LOLZ! That was funny as heck! And thanks for the info on what she was doing in Soul Society when Ichigo's mortal body died! But why did you have to put down Neliel? Do you plan to bring her back, oh don't want to spoil the moment! But this chapter is one of the best I've read since you first started! I look forward to the next chapter soon so until then, as what Ichigo's hollow would say, "Don't die before we meet again!" |
| attu chapter 32 . 7/13/2009 Wah hoo! Vizards to the rescue! I dunno what else to say, but I look forward to the coming battles! -Flames :) |
| NotQuiteDG chapter 32 . 7/13/2009 GAH, awesomeness! Quick update, shit. Great chapter, looking forward to watching some good old Vaizard ass-whoopin next chap, and Ichigo and Aizen? Oh-Looking good. Double death, to close the story before epilogue? Can't say there's much for Ichigo to live for, besides the Royal Guard..Can't see him wanting to do that though, really.. Anyways, good job, I'll be waiting patiently(or not...) |
| spin1978 chapter 32 . 7/13/2009 This is the best timed chapter release EVER. I am presently stuck in an airport for an hour and change, so I had plenty of time to read! I am going to mentally title the Ulquiorra & Yumichika battle against Yammy to be "Despair & The Diva Vs. The Dumba$$." :) Alliteration is my friend, obviously. I'm curious to see how Ulquiorra's segunda etapa plays out against the power of the Cero Espada. And vizards to the rescue! (You will have to bear the "you're being influenced by the latest manga developments" comments with a stout heart, as I'm sure this was planned well in advance, it's just a matter of fortuitous timing.) And of course Ichigo vs Aizen (Kago) for real, at last! I'm trying to imagine an older-looking Ichigo in lieu of Aizen at the moment - it's a bit odd, but it is an interesting visual. |
| Barranca chapter 32 . 7/13/2009 Darn, this is massacre - will the last enemy have to be defeated for the shinigami and renegade arrancar get some peace? |
| 000000000000000000000Zero00000 chapter 32 . 7/13/2009 I just realized something: What happened to Chad? |
| Traitor-Hero chapter 32 . 7/13/2009 I like the "Close Save" scenario! It's so much fun trying to guess who's going to show up! And love the fact that Orihime learned to fight. Every fic seems to have her in a medic/weak role, but you've kept the female roles really up in good standing. And Rangiku's pregnant? *Shock* Abd I love whoever she fought, because they seemed really honorable in my opinion. Or lazy, like the actual Primera. Can't wait for your next chapter! Traitor-Hero |
| Kuroi Amaya chapter 31 . 7/13/2009 Once again, I can find no criticism when it comes to reading your work. It is a pleasure to find such well-written work on this site, and I am thoroughly enjoying this fanfiction. You keep me guessing. Most fanfictions are rather dull because they are so predictable, but yours has surprises everywhere. The battle scenes are great as well. Some of the occurences in this story are better than the real story, in my opinion. And here we go, I've written an insanely long review when all I wanted to do was say well done and keep up the good work. Anyways, keep it up! Ja ne. |
| Cynicow chapter 31 . 7/13/2009 Woah woah woah. Back up for a minute here. I could be mistaken, but wasn't this story an IchiRuki? Either way, it's awesome. :D |
| digiwriter1392 chapter 31 . 7/12/2009 Amazing story so far. |
| Lord of Murder chapter 31 . 7/12/2009 Awesome chapter. |