Reviews for Torn
MatsuMama chapter 31 . 7/10/2009
Well, you've already gotten my running commentary, so I will settle for saying BALLER CHAP.

Srsly. The action scenes were top-notch, the tension ramped up higher than Robert Pattinson's fucking stupid hairdo, and if you don't update soon I'm going to fly to your hometown, visit your family, drink all your beer and kill you.

XD

So update soon, kay? XD

PS - Syphillis? Holy shit, Jaso is WHACKED when he's on shrooms... XP
JasoTheArtisan chapter 30 . 7/10/2009
WTF I SEE YOU CHANGED THE PAIRNING FROM ICHIRUKI TO GRIMMSPI WHAT THE F! K MAN THIS WAS SUCH A GOOD STORY UNTIL I NOTICED THAT

I HOPE YOU DIE OF SYPHALIS YOU STOOPID SHITTY AUTHOR

ALSO, UPDATE SOON XD XD
ImmortalPhantom22 chapter 30 . 7/9/2009
Another AWESOME chapter! Loved the fighting! You're always so great at writing fight scenes! _

I'm so excited to read more! I'm curious what will happen with everyone, especially Hector!

Keep it up!
Grinja chapter 30 . 7/8/2009
Uh oh, the shinigami are on the ropes. Is Ichigo going to come out and play again?
attu chapter 30 . 7/8/2009
Ahh! They're all losing! Well, I guess that's just life.. A great job on the chapter, and to JasoTheArtisan: nice beefing!

-Flames :)
Heronkai chapter 30 . 7/7/2009
Damn. I read chapter 30 and you're just killing the last shinigamei like flies. I feel bad lol. Still awesome. Upade asauc
F1yMordecai chapter 30 . 7/7/2009
Hugs for Matsumoto... she has too much of a hard history with Gin. It's funny, now that you've made Momo a villain, I like her character again. She was just such a bother before with her puppy-like devotion to Aizen, but now that it's paying off, she's a totally hard, cold-blooded killer...and that just comes off as badass. Still, kick her ass, Soi Fon!

Heh, seems like you've given Wonderweiss actual speech now instead of just "waa...ugh...ga..." Seems that he got a second exposure to the Hougyoku and now he's not such a 'tard. XD haha sorry, I just never really liked his character until the recent chapters when it showed that he's actually not a witless being.

Yipes, things are not looking good for the Shinigami side. Surprising that things turned downhill so fast for Hisagi's fight with Szayel, but it HAS been many years since the Espada came to fight, so they are bound to have gotten much better and faster since then. Although I have to admit that Yammy's fist coming down onto Yumichika's released blade will hurt like a bitch. :-P

All of these arrancar (Vizard in Momo's case?) are crazy strong, but hey, where's the fun in them being weak creatures? Good fights overall! Definitely ended on cliffies for all of them and I'm eager to see how they get resolved.
Heronkai chapter 29 . 7/7/2009
Dammit it took forever to read that. Okay I caught up and I'm hooked. Update soon thanks _
MatsuMama chapter 30 . 7/7/2009
Ok, one word for this chapter: BAD. ASS. Ok, that was two words, but only for the sake of emphasis. :P

Great opening scene - jeezus, Gin is evil! :P And just so you know, I will ONLY tolerate Pwnsauce Momo as long as she DIES eventually. You get me? XP

AWESOME fight sequences throughout, really. Hisagi x Szayzel was deliciously roller coaster, and I cant WAIT to see what Yumi does to Yammi (...Yumi. Yammy. Yumi. Yammy. heheheheheh...) Basically, they ALL kicked ass, and you had BETTER update soon because with a record 5-cliffie chapter, making us wait to see what happens would be the very definition of cruelty. XD
Lord of Murder chapter 30 . 7/7/2009
dang the shinigami that are left are having their asses handed to them. Dosen't look good for them. Good chapter thanks for the update.
DarkJackel chapter 30 . 7/6/2009
Wow things do look bleak. Personally I am hoping Ichigo will be able to rain on the Espada's parade soon.

-_-Me-_-
Traitor-Hero chapter 30 . 7/5/2009
Everyone's dying! Oh well, it's all good. I mean, in the current canon fights, some of them should be dead five times over. And they just had to go and kill Ukitake. (I hope not.)

But in regards to your fights... very well done. It's really hard to find a good fight scene where everyone's just going all out, instead of trying to find their opponents weakness.

Can't wait for your next chapter!

Traitor-Hero
dracos1485 chapter 30 . 7/5/2009
A great chapter, I enjoyed all the fights, though I hope you don't kill off Soifon and Grimmjow after building up their characters so well.
DarkJason chapter 30 . 7/5/2009
Nice to see you again! What a action packed chapter, but I can't help but wonder what will happen when the fights are over. But in any case, you make this reviewer a very happy reviewer! Although I do have to pose some questions.

How is Hector by the way?

And will you be involving the vizards in helping taking down Aizen or is that left up to just to Ichigo, and speaking of which will we see him again in the upcoming chapters?

And what does it mean "The climax begins?"

Get back at me, soon! By the way, excellent work on today's chapter!

P.S. Did you hear in Bleach Ch. 364 Soul Society got their asses kicked, but look on the bright side, the vizards are finally here!"
spin1978 chapter 30 . 7/5/2009
The time it took to get these fights written thus far is well worth it, it's the right time for some serious throwing down between the two sides. I'm curious to see how they'll pan out - the matchups aren't necessarily the ones I'd think of at first pass, but they are very compelling.

Wonderweiss is something of a mystery wrapped in an enigma. I think just about any development of the character could make sense given the right backstory between what we see in canon (or where you branch off from canon) and where you bring him into the picture here.

Glad to hear that Greek is over (could this foreshadow further development of the battle between Soul Society and the Dekatimori, perhaps? :)) and that you're not dead.
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