Reviews for Torn
TheDisruptiveOne chapter 29 . 6/9/2009
Screw you Rukia! Get off your high horse woman! You can easily be replaced! Ichigo should totally find some random and hook up with her. And he can rub his relationship with her in Rukia's face! KUKUKU. That will show that ungrateful woman.

(Yes, I'm quite mad. Your paragraph at the end wasn't enough to appease me. Ichigo didn't do anything out of selfishness here. I even find myself hoping he will join Aizen and kill Rukia now. lol, I'm sadistic.)

Good chapter Jazz.
Lord of Murder chapter 29 . 6/9/2009
Ah! Kenpachi's dead! What happened to Yachiru then! Also geez the captain's got owned. As for the Rukia/Ichigo reunion I thought it was well written I just hope they get back together eventually. Good chapter I enjoyed it.
Temple117 chapter 29 . 6/9/2009
I absolutely love what you're doing with the characters, especially Ichigo!

The kid that sacrificed everything in order to save them all in the end. Great character depth.

Keep up the amazing work!
RedSeraph chapter 29 . 6/9/2009
I agree; excellent chappie!
Grinja chapter 29 . 6/9/2009
Good chapter. Just an idea, but it might be amusing if Ichigo helped out Grimmjow's son with some training.
DarkJason chapter 29 . 6/9/2009
Holy that is the name of freaking crap! So much tension from Rukia and Ichigo AND Rukia saying his last name? Ichigo, if I were you, I would NOT do something that crazy again, man! And a Renji/Rukia moment! But are they really together, oh don't wanna give away spoilers! :D As for the captains, at least we know how they were caught. And what's this? U Kenpachi is dead? Now i know this is getting really juicy! As for Hector, the potential to become a great character in his own right! Big ups to Gin directing him to the Vizards! But what's this, a Rangiku and Gin moment? Talk about cwazyness in all directions! Very well done with this chapter! I look forward to seeing an update soon!

P.S. I know what you're going through in college because I'm a college kid myself! XD
F1yMordecai chapter 29 . 6/9/2009
Oh holy crap, so that's how the captains have been captured! Such an ingenious play using Aizen's sword to trap them all in illusions. I see the lineup is all here now and we've found out what happened to the other captains. No way Kenpachi would ever submit to that anyway and it does not surprise me that Aizen was the one to take out old Yama.

Fuck IchiRuki. lol

Of COURSE she wouldn't immediately take him back after leaving her for twenty years and getting killed. Love how she's using his last name now, showing how much distance she's put between them to deal with her own pain. YAY FOR RENRUKI :-) At least he's going to get the girl for a while.

ACK what is Gin up to? Hector is turning into such an interesting character and I can't wait until he meets up with the Vizard...well that's who I'm thinking Gin pointed him to.
ColinatorGX chapter 29 . 6/9/2009
You are indeed playing the caracters in a very human way, and i'm really enjoying it. I must say, some people might think they wouldn't be this much affected by Ichigo's return, but they're only humans after all. IT is the reactions of humans, the feelings of humans, the attitudes of normal people that makes this story so good.
BioHazard82 chapter 29 . 6/9/2009
Another great chapter. Please update soon.
MatsuMama chapter 29 . 6/9/2009
OMG, this chapter positively SEETHES with energy and tension! Aizen's prison for the former Sereitei captains gave me goosebumps - hey, if something can creep GIN out, then I'm allowed to wig! O.o

I love that Aizen isn't the least bit fazed by Ichigo's return. True to character (and TOTALLY IC, thank GODS), Sousuke must have SOMETHING up his sleeve; nothing rattles that guy. EXCELLENT setup for an epic finale!

And the Ichigo/Rukia scene... O.o I mean, I ADORE IchiRuki, but you're right - that's probably the way it would play out, really. Rukia is WAY to tough a cookie to dissolve into forgiving tears and mushily take Ichigo back. And I'm ok with the RenRuki, so I'm not even mad. (...you ate a whole wheel of cheese?)

And the final scene with Gin and Hector was GREAT setup. I'm really liking Hector, he's shaping up to be a fabulous OC (one that doesn't sound like you, har har har). Can't wait to see what you do with him...

Gin vs. Matsu. YUS! *dances impatiently* Update PLEASE! (or least send me some spoilers, dammit!)
Traitor-Hero chapter 29 . 6/9/2009
Bit sad about the IchiRuki, but I agree, it is realistic. And RenRuki isn't that bad to read... most of the time. Love the cliffhanger!

Traitor-Hero
JasoTheArtisan chapter 29 . 6/9/2009
what no more ichiruki that was the whole reason i was reading this storry.

haha just kidding. could you imagine if i was like that? besides, i'm sure you'll be getting plenty of those soon, considering.

good chapter; the gin/aizen scene SCREAMED vader/palpatine. so you know i was a fan.

fuck ichiruki.

gin is a boss. and hector looks like he's gonna be one too.

also, go kill yourself.

stupid shitty author.
Mistical Kat chapter 28 . 6/8/2009
This is such a detailed and intricate story! I absolutely adore it so update soon!

-Kat
Guest chapter 11 . 6/7/2009
hurray grimnjow is alive and aw he is thinking about soi that is cute!
Guest chapter 10 . 6/7/2009
shiro chan hahaha so I heard from jaso about your fic so I decided to read and see what was the fic about. Not bad so far. I love soi/grim parings (I blame jaso for that cause he got me hooked on it) so I guess I will be reading the rest of the chapters. no dont kill Grimjow
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