Reviews for Torn |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Oh... It wasn't Grimmjow... YAY! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nooooooo! Not Grimmjow! D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hichigo called Ichigo a rabbit! :D That's f'n awesome. |
![]() ![]() ![]() :o I'm not very good at reviews but that was my exact face. |
![]() ![]() ![]() great chapter! now, next chapter. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() damn. this story is so cool that i'm totally hooked when i finished reading chapter 1! reading next chapter ;) |
![]() ![]() I know you wrote this a few years back, and i have no issue with the concept of Grimm and Shao knowing each other in the past. My issue is this should probably take place 100-150 years ago. I'm reading this and it feels more like 40-60 years ago instead. i'd suspended my disbelief up until the dumpster body and the car. I think it lost some magic when I realized that this was too modern to be realistic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() took me three seconds to figure out Rangiku was pregnant im sure with gins baby... nice way to drop that... what happened to Nel was cold but i was grinning throughout strange aint it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Suigetsu...Engetsu and Zangetsu... i see what yu did there... |
![]() ![]() ![]() One word... WONDERFUL! (I'm so going to read So, Anymonous, Nebula, and your two next stories... Now!) ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing story. I actually have read both "So" and "Anonymous", and in my opinion, this is right up there with those two. Although this one doesn't focus as much on GrimmSoi as all the other characters' development... On a side note... I can't believe you killed off like half the characters! *calms down* Ok, well, I can see why it was kind of necessary though. But still, it's a shame to see all those people go. I'm interested to see what happens with Ichigo's reincarnation. I guess the reason he's reincarnated is why his Hollow's still around? I was kind of wondering about that. I'm definitely going to read the sequels to this story, it was amazing and I'm not willing for the story to end just yet xP Great job, keep writing~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nel is disappoint, Ichigo! Great story, I love reading Evil!Ichigo, Dark!Ichigo, and Arrancar!Ichigo, even though he isn't an Arrancar in this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well damn... I thought Ichigo was gonna pull some full-blown, but permanent, Hollow traformation and turn into some kinda monster... Well at least in body. Then he would be left in a crushing loniliness for all of eternity or something like that... I get angsty sometimes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ...Tarou. Me like. but, "" at the end there... ' actually sums it up rather glad i was outside when i read this chapter, otherwise i think i would've woken up the little guy... |
![]() ![]() ![]() " "You've been gone for twenty years." " HOLYMOTHEROFABRAHAMLINCON. God i'm glad i stopped when i told myself to last night, otherwise you would've kept me going till NOON |