The only thing I have a problem with (besides the language, but at least you use yours sparingly and in character) is the name! Why that name? Well, I guess I can see your reasoning, but still!

Other than that...I could hug you right now. That's how good this was. Just THAT good.

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Wow. You. Are. Good.

I think I'll stop just these silly one-liners...

No harsh language either...Dang. Amazing.

Oh...I LOVE it! I want to kill them all, but I love it! :D

I don't seem to have a very helpful critique for this story...;

O, I LIKE! IchixRuki AND Inner hollow fic PLUS good writing! :D *glomp*

i loved the story... but i hate you... you killed him! i so hate you right now... i stayed up al night from about 11pm when i started this to 7 am now... i so hate you i can't believe you killed ichigo... i mean come on he is the main character/hero guy.. HE NEVER DIES!

i hate you... im going to go sulk now...you killed him...

you just killed off the ENTIRE kurosaki family... what the fuck...

im in like shock...

omg you didnt... omg you have me in tears! gah this isnt fair... isshin... yuzu... karin... aaw man... im bawlin my eyes out and this is a fanfiction!

you so so suck...

omg yes! and before i rant i hadnt realized that you'd killed tousen. so sorry!

BUT OMG!

a pissed ichigo is a fangirl worthy ichigo -muffled squeals-

But i loved how once again ichigo is like you know what fuck you and your ruled im going for whats right.

OMFG YOU... you did not just kill grimmjow... what the fuck...

OMG epic! i love how you made ichigo the way we al wanted him.. i wasn't so sure bout the aizen thing. but i def-DEFINITELY love the Hichigo alliance.

Wow, you've got so many reviews that i doubt your even reading my review... lol

when i first read the beginning of your story i was like OMG! This is one of the few really good Bleach fanics!

In fact, I was so hooked that I constantly read your story (no breaks!) instead of doing my homework.

Unfortunately, I was very disappointed at the end.

Before I go on, I must tell you i'm an Ichiruki fan, so... ya, you can't blame me for being mad...

Anyways, my happiness ended as soon as Shiro said "You've been gone for 20 years."

I was like, 'okay, um... right' and i kept on reading, then all of ichigo's friends were mad at him for 'coming back to life',

and then... rukia? ... renji? ... rukia! ... !

WAH! I mean ichigo basically lost everything and everyone close to him!

And his dad somehow came back to life and it didn't look like he even shed a tear over Karin and Yuzu! Plus, What happened to ichigo after aizen FIRST 'killed' him, did he just vanish and appear next to Ishiin (sorry if i'm spelling everything wrong)!

Ya so, i... disliked... the ending, but the beginning and middle were amazing.

Sorry for my sudden outburst, i just needed to let some people know is all...

heh, i'll take a look at your sequels to see if they answer some questions

AH ITS SO GOOD! I've been looking for a senrio like ths for weeks

I loved this fic! i can't wait until the third set of it comes out!

Tarou...Ichigo...I see what you did there :D

I must say this fic was epic. Like, really epic. I loved your crack pairings that still had lots of chemistry even though my hopes of having HitsuHina in this story were crushed in that one chapter ;

Really really well written...I have to favourite this Dx

This story is really a masterpiece. If someone had told me that Ichigo really went over to Aizen in cannon, I would probably think that this is how the plot would go. All the action scenes were really well written and the characters accurately portrayed. I haven't started reading Triumph properly yet, but I'll definitely get to it soon.

The only thing that bothers me though (and I'm pretty sure many have asked you this already), is Ichigo's ending. Surely you don't intend to keep him out of the way for the rest of your triology, right? You made him way too awesome (in many ways) to just chuck him aside for good. I skimmed through Triumph, but he didn't seem to make an appearance as far as I could tell. I really hope we'll get to see him again once your third installment is up, cos I was quite depressed after reading the epilogue with Ichigo and Rukia, where he completely lost his memory.

But overall, this fic is amazing! Awesome job on writing this, one of the best around. (: