|Reviews for On Our Way|
| Stelladoro chapter 9 . 2/17
Lovely story, I would love to read Bella's reaction when they wake up! Hope you're planning on continuing this eventually.
| Bklyngrrl chapter 9 . 12/25/2013
This is a wonderful story that has so many options at this point! I hope that you get the chance to come back to it: I would love to see it continued!
| Jess1991 chapter 9 . 11/11/2013
love this story its so good
| SliverFlick chapter 4 . 2/27/2013
Why is Bella not worried about the papparazi getting a sniff about their realtionship? I mean, shouldn't Edward know better? What if Bella doesn't like being a celebrity?
| Chocolatine chapter 9 . 2/22/2013
I so looooove this story ! I really really hope you'll consider picking it up sometime soon.
I'll go check your other stories because you write beautifully ! :D
| cmtaylor531 chapter 9 . 11/17/2011
i was just getting into this story. Sad you had to put it on hiatus. I hope you come back to it someday
| TheMrsW chapter 9 . 8/12/2011
I know this story is on hiatus, but I was curious if you thought you'd ever finish. Would love to see how things go with these two.
| Fire lilly on the briar chapter 9 . 7/26/2011
i dont mean to pester but is there a chance that you will take this of hiatus any time this year? i would love it if you would. read this story 3 times so far. :P i'll be hoping!
| shandi25 chapter 9 . 2/3/2011
so sad you stopped writing it was really good
| GreenEyes555 chapter 9 . 12/24/2010
N'awwww they're so cute together! and awkward bella makes me chuckle :)
Update soon please! one of the best stories i've read in a while.
MERRY CHRISTMAS :D
| Spinningmadly88 chapter 9 . 12/19/2010
Just popping in to say I love and miss this story :) Hope all is well with you Alverdine.
| LuckyStar815 chapter 9 . 11/5/2010
Is it all? Goddamn it!
You owe me moar!
PS your cracked me up. Her name is Polish for her own good hahhahahha.
| LuckyStar815 chapter 6 . 11/5/2010
Oh, the longing! it is driving me insane!
You can't run away from yourself (I know it because I tried...)... poor Edward!
Still, Bella is also trying to run away. I can feel her pain; if you had ever suffered heartbreak, you just can't jump into the new relationship, because you know how much it would hurt if it ends badly... and given their circumstances, the chances for that are great!
I wonder how you were going to end this. At this point, it looks like an impasse :(
| LuckyStar815 chapter 5 . 11/4/2010
Oh woman, you're going to be the death of me!
I loved, loved, loved the melody metaphor, how she is keeping his music in tune! It's prefect, truly fascinating and yet so simple. But simplicity is key (pun intended indeed).
And almost-a-kiss... sometimes it's more exciting than a kiss itself... what Bella is afraid of? she seems to be broken beyond repair and it's gonna take a lot of effort for Edward to earn her trust...
IDK why you want to fix something so perfect, bb.
And by the way, here goes your 400th review! )
| LuckyStar815 chapter 3 . 11/3/2010
Damn you Bella, why so slow? *shakes head*
I love it, anyway. The emotions are so real, when I read it feels like it's actually happening with me *dreamy sighhhhhh* :)