Reviews for Pas de Deux
ROBINV chapter 1 . 1/6/2009
This story creeped me out, but are we supposed to know who she is? It says it's only one chapter; will there be more? This sounds like the beginning of a case for the boys.

Love, Robin
bhoney chapter 1 . 1/5/2009
Wow. This was just beautifully written. Very descriptive, really bittersweet, knowing what we know about where she really is.

This in particular stood out to me: "It wasn't better for it to be just them, because two was such a little number, just two points needed for a line, and there was nothing stable about that. Three for a triangle, the strongest shape there was, and nothing could excuse her mother for walking out on them, for not caring that Dad would be lonely, for not caring who Laura would grow up to be. If they had been three, the nightmare would never have gotten her." Really powerful.

Well done!