Reviews for If only, if only
CrazyFool65 chapter 2 . 5/9/2012
its been awhile but i hope you continue this again it is very good.

the hiei yukina moments were very good please update again.
Guest chapter 2 . 6/1/2009
oh no, it looks like it's been a while since you updated. I hope you haven't given up on the story or something, because I've really enjoyed it so far.

It seems pretty well written, and I like how the characters are...well, in character. Although yeah, Hiei does seem a little goofy around Yukina, but it's cute and seeing as how she's like the only person he likes, it doesn't seem too horribly out of character.

Anyway, hoping for another chapter soon ~
P.E.R.S.O.N.A EXPERT chapter 2 . 5/11/2009
This chapter was even better than the last.I loved the interaction between Yukina and Hiei.I Hope you find some time to update this story, I would very much like to read the next chapte and find out what happens next.
P.E.R.S.O.N.A EXPERT chapter 1 . 5/11/2009
First chapter was great!
karinfan123 chapter 2 . 2/27/2009
GOOD STORY! Continue please.
Misao2008 chapter 2 . 2/14/2009
Great story! Keep up the good work! This is going on my favorites!
Hieiko chapter 2 . 1/24/2009
Ooh, Hiei's got himself in a complicated situation... er, a bit more complicated than it already was, anyway. Can't wait for more of this story! :)
shell333-2008 chapter 1 . 1/5/2009
this is great please continue