Reviews for All the Difference
manumarlopez chapter 4 . 8/9/2013
hi, im kind of in love of jasper alice, pre- twilihgt stories, yours is one of the most descriptive , and it make you like transport to their head, like alices and her pain. thanks
JapserFREAK chapter 22 . 7/27/2013
Wow! You are a really great author. I loved the entire thing and I will recommend this story to my friends.
Guest chapter 10 . 5/23/2013
thankyou

I am enjoying your story.
sylvia.przychodzki chapter 22 . 4/2/2013
A beautiful story, full of deep emotions! I really liked chapter 15 where Alice describes the different types of embraces she experiences. I can't wait to read the rest of your stories! I was really looking for a great Alice and Jasper meeting story and this hit the spot! I'm going to hunt for a Rosalie and Emmett one next. )
Guest chapter 20 . 3/21/2013
This chapter is absolutely adorable!
Guest chapter 18 . 3/21/2013
Okay this chapter about Jasper not being able to see his scars literally makes my life.
Guest chapter 15 . 3/21/2013
I just want to take minute to say that this story is amazing! I'm practically crying right now because of your interpretations of embrace. I love Twilight, but this story is much more than that. It is about love and its hardships and joys and I think you captured it perfectly. I'm so glad I discovered this story. Thank you.
Guest chapter 22 . 2/21/2013
OMG! THIS IS THE BESTEST MOST AWESOME MOST AMAZING FANFIC EVER!
I SAT UP AND READ IT ALL TILL ABOUT 3 IN THE MORNING...AND I GOT A FEELING THAT I'M GOING TO BE DREAMING ABOUT THIS FOR THE NEXT YEAR OT SO.
YOU ARE AN AMAZING WRITER. i'D LOVE TO BUY ANY BOOK THAT YOU PUBLISH :-) :-)
Guest chapter 4 . 2/21/2013
WOW...This story is absolutely amazing !
I love writing too...and I rarely come across a fanfic that I can't criticize..But this one is just breath-taking !
AJluv chapter 12 . 1/23/2013
Heck yeah it's up to expectations! I love how perfectly... Perfect it is!
AJluv chapter 9 . 1/23/2013
Love your disclaimers! I love your storylines, double love your long alternating chapters, and triple love well, EVERYTHING! Please write more!
tatie1970 chapter 22 . 12/11/2012
Hi

I started reading this story because my daughter liked it. She's only twelve but very mature for her age (home schooled, does the trick every time !). So she can read ff but she has to limit herself to K and T stories. I trust her on this so it's not like I check every story she reads. This was one of her firsts and the one she likes best so she suggested it to me. I enjoyed it immensely. It's such a heartfelt story. And it really made me love Alice and Jasper even more. I normally restrict myself to Edward and Bella stories. So it really was quite the discovery. Thank you for writing it.

PS We're not English native speakers. Sorry for any spelling mistakes in this review
Miss-Margaux-Malfoy chapter 20 . 12/10/2012
This is such a good story
Lena xo chapter 22 . 8/11/2012
Ohmigosh, I love love love how this story ended, so much
Love,
Lena xo
Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 22 . 6/23/2012
Amazing story! I love how you actually took the time to research the facts and find out stuff. How did you actually find that though? Where would it say that it snowed and rained on march whatever day it was in 1948?

Goddess... I feel so much like a judge right now... anyways, I took notes on stuff in the story. Here they are!

I'm not sure if Wiki is a trustworthy source, but there were a few things that I noticed were off about her human life acording to that site. Firstly, it said that her father was a jeweler, and secondly her mother was murdered and her father re-married (his bnew wife hated Alice and loved her sister, but that's not really important).

The first vision that Alice has is of Jasper and the Cullens. I'm not sure why I took that note, but I don't recall what the first vision that she had was.

I noticed in your story that Alice's POV and Jasper's POV sound similar in the way that they think. You could try making Alice's thoughts more happy and energetic... but Jasper's are pretty good as they are. I seem to recall that the only people who haven't tasted human blood are Carlisle, rosalie and Bella. wouldn't Alice accidentally slip up some time? then again, I haven't done my research... I just have a good memory.

Chapter 18 was so sweet and symbolic. I almost thought he'd propose to her right then and there.

The interaction between Alice and Edward in chapter 19 was interesting. It's sweet that she can see Bella already. Maybe that's why Edward prefers brunettes... LOL

I love the almost spontaneity of chapter 20. It seems like everything happens so fast yet so slow.

The epilogues were so short... though I'm glad that you didn't do one of them as the wedding... ugh! I've read enough times two of weddings on here! ... LOL

Sorry if anything came off as harsh... I'm working on that.

Keep up the great work! :) (:

Tarah xXx
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