Reviews for All the Difference
Guest chapter 4 . 2/21/2013
WOW...This story is absolutely amazing !
I love writing too...and I rarely come across a fanfic that I can't criticize..But this one is just breath-taking !
AJluv chapter 12 . 1/23/2013
Heck yeah it's up to expectations! I love how perfectly... Perfect it is!
AJluv chapter 9 . 1/23/2013
Love your disclaimers! I love your storylines, double love your long alternating chapters, and triple love well, EVERYTHING! Please write more!
tatie1970 chapter 22 . 12/11/2012
Hi

I started reading this story because my daughter liked it. She's only twelve but very mature for her age (home schooled, does the trick every time !). So she can read ff but she has to limit herself to K and T stories. I trust her on this so it's not like I check every story she reads. This was one of her firsts and the one she likes best so she suggested it to me. I enjoyed it immensely. It's such a heartfelt story. And it really made me love Alice and Jasper even more. I normally restrict myself to Edward and Bella stories. So it really was quite the discovery. Thank you for writing it.

PS We're not English native speakers. Sorry for any spelling mistakes in this review
Miss-Margaux-Malfoy chapter 20 . 12/10/2012
This is such a good story
Lena xo chapter 22 . 8/11/2012
Ohmigosh, I love love love how this story ended, so much
Love,
Lena xo
Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 22 . 6/23/2012
Amazing story! I love how you actually took the time to research the facts and find out stuff. How did you actually find that though? Where would it say that it snowed and rained on march whatever day it was in 1948?

Goddess... I feel so much like a judge right now... anyways, I took notes on stuff in the story. Here they are!

I'm not sure if Wiki is a trustworthy source, but there were a few things that I noticed were off about her human life acording to that site. Firstly, it said that her father was a jeweler, and secondly her mother was murdered and her father re-married (his bnew wife hated Alice and loved her sister, but that's not really important).

The first vision that Alice has is of Jasper and the Cullens. I'm not sure why I took that note, but I don't recall what the first vision that she had was.

I noticed in your story that Alice's POV and Jasper's POV sound similar in the way that they think. You could try making Alice's thoughts more happy and energetic... but Jasper's are pretty good as they are. I seem to recall that the only people who haven't tasted human blood are Carlisle, rosalie and Bella. wouldn't Alice accidentally slip up some time? then again, I haven't done my research... I just have a good memory.

Chapter 18 was so sweet and symbolic. I almost thought he'd propose to her right then and there.

The interaction between Alice and Edward in chapter 19 was interesting. It's sweet that she can see Bella already. Maybe that's why Edward prefers brunettes... LOL

I love the almost spontaneity of chapter 20. It seems like everything happens so fast yet so slow.

The epilogues were so short... though I'm glad that you didn't do one of them as the wedding... ugh! I've read enough times two of weddings on here! ... LOL

Sorry if anything came off as harsh... I'm working on that.

Keep up the great work! :) (:

Tarah xXx
Frances357 chapter 12 . 1/16/2012
this is perhaps the best description of jasper's inner struggles that i have ever read. lovely and poignant.
Frances357 chapter 5 . 1/16/2012
Jasper's comment at the end of the last chapter about him slipping away was really poetic. And this chapter with Alice is heartbreaking, yet her fortitude is evident and gives hope.
Frances357 chapter 2 . 1/16/2012
Really interesting perspectives, and great storytelling. Thanks for creating this, I can't wait to keep reading and see where it goes.
Emily Ebriection chapter 22 . 7/15/2011
I'm dead. I've died and somehow made it to heaven. I've been reading this since really late last night and it's now ten a. m. and I am really close to worshiping my laptop. Seriously. I love these Alice-and-Jasper-before-the-Cullens' stories because it's great to see the different ways people interpret it. You, my friend, have bundled up everything that I loved in previous stories and added so much to it in this one fic! As you can see from my name, I love Jasper and Alice. I totally love them even more now. Thanksgiving was the absolute SWEETEST thing EVER! You have a wonderful writing style, too! The embraces, the things she learned. I loved it all! You know how you said that writing in Jasper makes you talk and write kinda like him for a bit after that? Me too! I thought I was just insane... Well, by the length of this review, I am! Wonderful story!
oh werd chapter 22 . 5/3/2011
Yayyyyy
oh werd chapter 14 . 5/2/2011
Thanks for the extras at the end. I'm a detail freak too so I could appreciate it. I was thinkin that little speech was somewhere close to 1000 as I was reading it, but how cool that you are my accuracy twin. You complete me. You're the Jasper to my Alice. Great job to those chapters twin!
oh werd chapter 12 . 5/2/2011
I like the way Alice calls the Cullens "my" family already. And how Jasper still has his accent. I wish more of the Cullens had accents.
oh werd chapter 10 . 5/2/2011
Way to fenagle a reason for Jas to go to Philly. I like ur style lol.
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