|Reviews for All the Difference|
| Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 22 . 6/23/2012
Amazing story! I love how you actually took the time to research the facts and find out stuff. How did you actually find that though? Where would it say that it snowed and rained on march whatever day it was in 1948?
Goddess... I feel so much like a judge right now... anyways, I took notes on stuff in the story. Here they are!
I'm not sure if Wiki is a trustworthy source, but there were a few things that I noticed were off about her human life acording to that site. Firstly, it said that her father was a jeweler, and secondly her mother was murdered and her father re-married (his bnew wife hated Alice and loved her sister, but that's not really important).
The first vision that Alice has is of Jasper and the Cullens. I'm not sure why I took that note, but I don't recall what the first vision that she had was.
I noticed in your story that Alice's POV and Jasper's POV sound similar in the way that they think. You could try making Alice's thoughts more happy and energetic... but Jasper's are pretty good as they are. I seem to recall that the only people who haven't tasted human blood are Carlisle, rosalie and Bella. wouldn't Alice accidentally slip up some time? then again, I haven't done my research... I just have a good memory.
Chapter 18 was so sweet and symbolic. I almost thought he'd propose to her right then and there.
The interaction between Alice and Edward in chapter 19 was interesting. It's sweet that she can see Bella already. Maybe that's why Edward prefers brunettes... LOL
I love the almost spontaneity of chapter 20. It seems like everything happens so fast yet so slow.
The epilogues were so short... though I'm glad that you didn't do one of them as the wedding... ugh! I've read enough times two of weddings on here! ... LOL
Sorry if anything came off as harsh... I'm working on that.
Keep up the great work! :) (:
| Frances357 chapter 12 . 1/16/2012
this is perhaps the best description of jasper's inner struggles that i have ever read. lovely and poignant.
| Frances357 chapter 5 . 1/16/2012
Jasper's comment at the end of the last chapter about him slipping away was really poetic. And this chapter with Alice is heartbreaking, yet her fortitude is evident and gives hope.
| Frances357 chapter 2 . 1/16/2012
Really interesting perspectives, and great storytelling. Thanks for creating this, I can't wait to keep reading and see where it goes.
| Emily Ebriection chapter 22 . 7/15/2011
I'm dead. I've died and somehow made it to heaven. I've been reading this since really late last night and it's now ten a. m. and I am really close to worshiping my laptop. Seriously. I love these Alice-and-Jasper-before-the-Cullens' stories because it's great to see the different ways people interpret it. You, my friend, have bundled up everything that I loved in previous stories and added so much to it in this one fic! As you can see from my name, I love Jasper and Alice. I totally love them even more now. Thanksgiving was the absolute SWEETEST thing EVER! You have a wonderful writing style, too! The embraces, the things she learned. I loved it all! You know how you said that writing in Jasper makes you talk and write kinda like him for a bit after that? Me too! I thought I was just insane... Well, by the length of this review, I am! Wonderful story!
| oh werd chapter 22 . 5/3/2011
| oh werd chapter 14 . 5/2/2011
Thanks for the extras at the end. I'm a detail freak too so I could appreciate it. I was thinkin that little speech was somewhere close to 1000 as I was reading it, but how cool that you are my accuracy twin. You complete me. You're the Jasper to my Alice. Great job to those chapters twin!
| oh werd chapter 12 . 5/2/2011
I like the way Alice calls the Cullens "my" family already. And how Jasper still has his accent. I wish more of the Cullens had accents.
| oh werd chapter 10 . 5/2/2011
Way to fenagle a reason for Jas to go to Philly. I like ur style lol.
| oh werd chapter 9 . 5/2/2011
I really liked this perspective actually. Its refreshing to see the POV of a clueless vampire. Watching her figure it all out by herself, compiling everything she learns, and knowing how well she turns out, well, its just nice. I'm happy lol.
| grandn chapter 22 . 1/5/2011
HAve thoroughly enjoyed this story. I love your writing style.
Do you stillw rite Twilight stufrf?
| amber8807 chapter 2 . 10/18/2010
I love it! It is so intense. Really kept me on the edge of my seat! Good work on your part! I cant wait to read to next chapter!
| Kabbyjack chapter 4 . 10/17/2010
You are a wonderful writer. The way you perceive Jasper is so orginal and well writen. I can't wait to read the rest of the story.
| Alice's White Rabbit chapter 22 . 10/6/2010
What a wonderful story! I love your writing style, your attention to detail & the characters. At times, you had me in tears. I certainly hope that you continue with your writing. Thanks for the journey.
| samwise93 chapter 22 . 9/1/2010
Heyy, I've just spent the last 3 days reading through this whole story, and i wasnt signed up to this site, but i felt i had to sign up just i could leave a comment to you to tell you how much i really loved this story. Seriously i nearly cried at the end when you used the quote from the book from Bella. I know at the start of your first chaper you said you were really self conscious of your writing, but i just wanted to say that you shouldnt be at all. I really enjoyed reading your story, you captured the personalities of the characters so well! SOrry this review is becoming a bit of an essay. Keep writing. Thank you for sharing such a great story. xxx