|Reviews for All the Difference|
| overtherisingstar chapter 22 . 1/6/2010
Though I may have been a bit late in reading your story (about a year late, apparently), I still want to tell you that I thought it was beautiful. It certainly gave me a lot to think about. Thank you!
| LilBriarRoseMasochist chapter 22 . 12/26/2009
aw! that was really well done. i loved reading this one, it was great!
| masha.a chapter 7 . 12/21/2009
This is wonderfully written, and I enjoy reading it. THis is probably one of the best fanfics I've ever read concerning the backstory of Alice and Jasper.
| Nauticalmass chapter 19 . 12/10/2009
| Nauticalmass chapter 16 . 12/10/2009
Tell me about us. Jasper is so precious.
| Nauticalmass chapter 15 . 12/10/2009
I was wrong before. This is by far the best chapter. Very, very well done. I loved it.
| Nauticalmass chapter 12 . 12/10/2009
I think this is the best chapter so far. I love Jasper's feelings about killing humans and the explanation about the old woman. I am so looking forward to his meeting Alice.
| Nauticalmass chapter 11 . 12/10/2009
Very nice. I like Alice's thought process as she works out why she would see Jasper in relation to why she sees her future family.
| Nauticalmass chapter 7 . 12/10/2009
I am a bit confused about the good doctor and why as a vamp he would value human life. Unless you are going outside of canon, we know she wasn't changed by Carlisle, and we would know if Eleazar changed her. Carlisle's been around the block and he said only he and the Denali clan lived as they do. So, I'm wondering about your explanation. Also, what about James? How does he play into her story at all?
| Nauticalmass chapter 5 . 12/10/2009
Good spot on the lack of shock therapy when Alice was in the asylum. You would think that a fact checker would find that. I am surprised that her angel has amber-colored eyes and not red.
| Ginaaaa chapter 22 . 11/27/2009
This was such a great story, I loved it.
| berley chapter 22 . 10/21/2009
I really adore Jasper/Alice stories, and this one is definitely one of my favourites. Great attention to detail. I am really impressed with your ability to express emotions that are honest and realistic.
| ElspethGordie chapter 21 . 10/19/2009
Wow, that was excellent. I've read several Jasper/Alice pre-twilight backgrounds, and this is by far the best. Great attention to detail, and not overly verbose. You didn't drag it out longer than necessary, and stayed true to the original characters with a very believable pace and plot. I enjoyed the pre-transformation Alice, and appreciate the corrections you made to the timeline. Great style and flow to the whole piece.
| Aqua Skies chapter 22 . 10/18/2009
This story was amazing! It was the perfect Alice/Jasper story and totally fit the canon. I loved it!
| juliet360 chapter 20 . 9/15/2009
Best. Proposal. Ever.