|Reviews for Carnal Apple, Woman Incarnate|
| ririi69 chapter 11 . 1/31
Wow, what a story!
I love! I truly love it, I don't know how it happened but there was a moment when I really wished She would choose Jack. Just INCREDIBLE and awesome!
| eckomoon chapter 1 . 6/22/2012
Loved this story. So hauntingly beautiful.
It was nice to read a story from Jack's point of view. I wish the show gave him a POV especially during/after the IP in season 3. I am going to read the sequel now.
| mamivampire chapter 11 . 5/20/2012
Fantastic piece. Absolutely incredible. I enjoyed every bit of it.
Thank you for sharing!
| blackheart4life chapter 11 . 5/21/2011
holy. I'm actually scared. What if JAck goeso n a mad hunt? what if he goes after them and hurts them? I mean it appears Blair picked Chuck, BUT ALAS this is the last part. i can't believe it but i did feel bad for jack. Poor guy :(
Great story! I'd never read a Jair before )
| blackheart4life chapter 10 . 5/21/2011
Battle of the Basses! At hong kong! This was intense, at first i was cheering for jack. Then for Chuck, then for none because she just wants to be alone, but at last Jack showed his true colors. Whilst he loves her, she hurts him the most and he becomes even more cruel than Chuck.
| blackheart4life chapter 9 . 5/21/2011
You make me soo confused! LOL I'm not a Jair but now that we look at Jack's past I can't help but feel for him. And if it wasn't for Jack when he was talkin to Chuck, Chuck would've felt Blair was abandoning him and Jack actually thought about Blair. I'm so confused i'm actually rooting for jack to find her.
| blackheart4life chapter 8 . 5/21/2011
I kind of respect that Blair isn't succuming to Jack's seduction because he is using her broken-ness to try to win ...now i feel bad for Blair because she's broken but DAMN IT BLAIR you're leading Jack on anyway! "He released his breath and felt tears of relief rise. His nostrils flared, and he pressed his fingers on the bridge of his nose. Jack closed the door and laid his head back against it." WOW he really is attached.
| blackheart4life chapter 7 . 5/21/2011
in regards to ur A/N:sry you got burnt,i kno this happened like WAYY long ago but i hate that i'm trying not to Jair or Chair, both are .WOW Jack is like a teenager in love right now xD."Because hell if he wasn't completely obsessed with a girl who was obsessed with a boy who was obsessed with himself."I admit i laughed at i never thought i'd say this but I feel BAD for Jack.I kinda wonder if he HAS blair will his obsession go away?
| blackheart4life chapter 6 . 5/21/2011
woah bass men face off, i actually feel nervous.""Will he take you away from me?" he asked, with all the brash Bass confidence he could muster." Damn, i'm actually starting to FEEL for is getting intense *grin*
| blackheart4life chapter 5 . 5/21/2011
It feels a little strange to see Jack fight in his own way for something that is so clearly Chuck's, and I'm not talking about the company :P. "Instead, he had been mesmerized by the way her eyes seemed to throb in their sockets while the boy spoke. And all he wanted to do was go to her and shield her." just the simple gesture of him wanting to SHIELD her makes me weirded out, LOL. But Jack is NOT nice, he is just after something he can't have.""I don't want him to ever be involved in my life. Not anymore." And then she mirrored the last words the boy had said to her out of his spite. "I'm over it."" My heart literally broke, or it felt like it did. I'm angry at chuck, but then poor blair and jack. UGH JACK! .
| blackheart4life chapter 4 . 5/21/2011
His attention is eerie. Because he WANTS to keep her submissive and suffering."She raised her chin and met his eyes. "If you tell him the truth, and he still doesn't want me, you can do anything you want. I wouldn't care." DAMN IT, i think this is just foreboding."Jack chuckled and met Blair's eyes. He hoped she knew how to keep her end of the bargain." It's weird, Chuck is there and Blair was happy but in the end Jack won anyway.
| blackheart4life chapter 3 . 5/21/2011
jack is getting kind of creepy, the way he's thinking that he's going to have her in the future makes me wonder if he believes he will have her without using force or if he won't care and he WILL use force? "One of these days she would fall." i would say wishful thinking."What would it do to Chuck, he wondered, if he knew the girl had ripped her insides apart, and continued to do so, because of him? But that was another piece of knowledge to spill another day." I kinda wish Blair HAD said something, right now she's just helping Jack."Fricking Casablanca and the crap he was forced to watch when his cable fritzed."I giggled at this line 's kind of insane how Blair NEVER cheats(in the beginning) but she's always pinned as a cheater. WOW the ending was nervewrecking.
| blackheart4life chapter 2 . 5/21/2011
I have to admit at times i get confused because i'm not sure if this is just Jack's POV or Chuck's also.I'm not sure if i should feel bad for Jack but considering that it seems he's actually HURT, it's weird, lol.i'm sorta confused, blair's pleading gaze means something happened between her and Jack? i wonder if chuck can see how Jack looks at blair.
| blackheart4life chapter 1 . 5/21/2011
Hmm Jack sounds scarily obsessed with Blair at first, is it because her affection is on Chuck? I admit i had to restart cuz at first i was confused and then i realized it's in Jack's POV.I'm liking the spin on this but Jack does seem a little crueller than Chuck,i also wonder if he sees blair's love as an obsessin or if you intend for it to be an obsession. hmm is the bathroom scene wat happened on new years?
| CB Always chapter 11 . 9/29/2010
I'm Chair all the way but this story had me rooting for Jack! You showed a side of him that the tv show hasn't. Great story can't wait to go read the sequel! I have enjoyed your stories I have read.