Reviews for Clarity
Sandra chapter 2 . 2/12/2011
ofcourse u have to write the next chapter clarity was really good
skye chapter 2 . 3/25/2009
yes i think you should continue clarity as most people who have continued with midnight sun lacked edwards insight and perspective and pretty much stick to the dialogue between edward and bella this is much better
Grace chapter 1 . 1/22/2009
Its great!
squody3015 chapter 2 . 1/21/2009
Please continue! You write so well in his POV!
Anna chapter 1 . 1/14/2009
This was great writing Simone! The only thing that bothered me is that Edward thought something about his experience at medical school, and I don't think Edward ever went to medical school. I think instead he should have thought something about how Carlisle had taught him that. Otherwise it was great!

Anna
skyeblue0610 chapter 2 . 1/13/2009
PLEASE ocntinue! Write his POV of his first night in bed with her. You write his pov well.

Edward pov's are my favorites!
Evy chapter 2 . 1/10/2009
Hey Simone its Evy, its gr8! ur an amazing write! U should keep going with it, i definitly want 2 hear what else happens.
Megan chapter 1 . 1/9/2009
NICE UTS SO GUD! I LUV IT!
emz chapter 1 . 1/8/2009
cool! ur a good writer!
stepanie chapter 1 . 1/8/2009
I love this story!
afs23 chapter 2 . 1/8/2009
yep definatly keep it up n write more :D
EdwardsGirlSarah chapter 2 . 1/8/2009
I like it if you keep writing I'll keep reading.
squody3015 chapter 1 . 1/6/2009
Aww! That was cute, and very well written. Loved it!
afs23 chapter 1 . 1/6/2009
wow edwards chracter is written perfectly :D thisa is great keep it up :D
EdwardsGirlSarah chapter 1 . 1/6/2009
I like it whats next?
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