|Reviews for Reality Check|
| pinkphoenix1985 chapter 18 . 5/11/2009
this is great!
| ukfan101 chapter 18 . 5/10/2009
Poor Sam when he walked in on Dean and Jess probably wondered if maybe Dean was still crazy...are you going to show what life is like back for the other Sam while this Dean is still with this other Sam..gosh I think I confused myself there...
| riquitv chapter 18 . 5/10/2009
thanks for the update! haha, i like how Jess and Dean relate, it was really funny when he called her Tinkerbell, haha, great scene. Until a new chapter :)
| J-09 chapter 18 . 5/9/2009
This is really awesome so far! Creative plot, witty dialog, and interesting OC's.
I'm glad Dean got out of the nut house, but I worry about how they're going to get things back to normal. I have a feeling John will not make it out alive... considering his state back in the "real world"
I'll be sad to see Jessica go... I think you write her very well. Poor girl.. I wish she hadn't died in the first episode. Honestly, I think she would have taken to the hunting thing fairly well if Sam had told her. )
Can't wait to read more!
| forensicleaf chapter 18 . 5/9/2009
Oh yay! Such a quick update! I'm happy ;)
So now we've seen a little bit of John and Bobby, are we possibly gona see a smidge of Cheryl and the orderly crew? I love those guys :D
Can't wait to see what's going to happen now!
| DeanBean chapter 18 . 5/9/2009
That was an amazing chapter
Poor Dean :(
I can't wait to see what happens next
More when you can
| The Tribble Master chapter 18 . 5/9/2009
Yea, Jess actually did well here. oboyoboy, i can't wait to see the end. what you have to ask yourself is,
a) how much will dean remember upon his reality return?
and b) will he hug sammy imeaditly upon return or is sam in peril too?
oh! c) will walpole take out on jess?
oy! can't wait for update!
| xoTomWellingxo chapter 18 . 5/8/2009
Aww... that was a good chapter. Poor Dean! ( It doesn't seem like the most opportune time to be having flashbacks or aftershocks, but I like the drama and you write it well, heh. Can't wait to read the next upadate. I'm guessing the vengeance demon will be making an appearance soon...as will that &%$!($ #! "Doctor." Keep up the awesomeness! )
| angeleyenc chapter 18 . 5/8/2009
plz plz update! this is so good!
| masondixon chapter 18 . 5/8/2009
This was a very good chapter (but they all are really). And it brought Walpole back into it. It has been awhile since that sick freak has been around and it brought back chills to what he did- and what he wants to do- to Dean. Jess was really great in this chapter and I loved when Dean asked her in the bathroom is she was "enjoying the show"! I was, in a sick sort of way :) I hope Bobby and John try to call Sam and Dean as they race to Kansas. Someone should warn Dean of what is right there before him. I look forward to your next chapter. Thank You.
| Nonoke chapter 18 . 5/8/2009
Really loved the wrestling, but I have to say that my fave part was Bobby calling John an idjit prior to shagging ass off to Lawrence.
Can't wait for everything to hit the fan. :)
| Ciya chapter 18 . 5/8/2009
Jess and Dean's 'fight' was hilarious! I could totally see those two doing that kinda thing then giggling when Sam caught them.
| PlatinumRoseLady chapter 18 . 5/8/2009
I thought that the stuff with Jess was great - really added to her character.
*Give the author a box of cookies for give us some nekkid Dean.*
| Zeenath and Moiira chapter 17 . 5/7/2009
OMG! AH! I'm so into this story, I almost yelped outloud when I realised that chapie 18 wasn't there! O-o
Please oh please hurry for the next chapters, this is an awesome story, I love it! -
gya, You rule :] Please continue!
Hope you have a great day/night
Lot's of Love
| ukfan101 chapter 17 . 5/7/2009
Jeepers I wonder if the Dean from this reality has been with the other Sam the whole time..and what is going to happen when they switch back! Something tells me that this Sam is going to be very sad to see this Dean go...but I am getting ahead of myself...great update...loved the Missouri and Dean interaction...