Reviews for Falling
Hannahble chapter 1 . 3/27/2010
I think this story was absolutely brilliant. Seriously, I added it to my favorites XD. Still, there were some punctuation errors and some more detail would've added more to the depth of the story.
firehawkxx chapter 1 . 1/11/2009
I liked this. It was angsty to an extent, it was yaoi-full, and I liked the little quote you had at the end. It was really good. I didn't find many gramatical errors, and I really ended up liking what you wrote :)
me myself and i chapter 1 . 1/6/2009
you know, i feel the same way...not to the point of being suicidle tho... i can hold my breath for a long time. freaked my parents out a couple of times, so i can sympathise. anyway, beautiful story, well written.
UchihaNa chapter 1 . 1/6/2009
Kya~! i loved it! it was sweet! XD