Reviews for Hopes and Schemes
ranchan-akari chapter 5 . 3/15/2015
...more? Please?
sawpan chapter 5 . 4/2/2014
This is good and i'd love to see an ending... but! Jay reeeeally pissed me off there. Blowing some other guy? When he even saw charles looking his way? Why would he do that? It made me hate him a bit. Poor charles!
Flamingkyra chapter 5 . 5/27/2013
Wow. This fan fiction is awesome on so many different levels. It literally had me cringing and rolling around at some points. XD
Anonymous chapter 5 . 11/23/2012
Can you update more? Please?
dood chapter 5 . 1/22/2012
Oh Jesus thi shasn't been updated in a while,so next to no hope of it happening now, but I want to say that this fanfic kick so much ass and that it's so good and you are awesome!
Random person D chapter 4 . 8/27/2011
Last update in 2009? Bad outlook for me.

Man, this fanfic had me grinning, blushing, and flipping to different windows just to calm myself down. Although it's incomplete, I'm somewhat satisfied with what's up right now as an ending. In fact, if it were completed with this, I'd be more than satisfied.




thank you for making this. It was one of the best damn fanfics I've read in a while. c:
to lazy to log in chapter 5 . 6/19/2010
HEY YOU! YEAH YOU! do you want to leave me as dissatisfied as nuu and shumie(sp?), well! if not, then provide me with another chapter, mayhaps an ending. i shall be entirely given to your wishes if you do. i have the patience of job but even i know he got frustrated with god every now and then.
waywardvictorian chapter 5 . 3/30/2010
Oh Jay, you door mat, you... Great story, lovely job.
Neitzarr chapter 5 . 12/19/2009
Uh update please.

This story is so riveting, I couldn't look away for the whole time I was reading. I love how you stuck to the storyline but added and changed what you wanted and how it suited you. I reckon you did really well.

Good luck writing next chapter.
Tiongy5 chapter 5 . 8/11/2009
This fic is really good! Update soon?
QueenOfThePirates chapter 5 . 7/11/2009
O! Cliff Hanger.

I sure hope Jay doesn't screw up. For sure. I love how Sarah is just so wonderfully blunt. She really helps out when it comes down to it. Hee hee. Yay for Meitis stepping in and trying to help out! Jay really needed the push, Charles too I think. Then again things aren't over yet. Just a little more to go! Yeah!

I think my favorite part in this chapter was the first two paragraphs after the little asterisks. Those made me laugh. Especially his plan and who he had been praying to. It made me giggle.

Once again, you write the most amazing work Author-san. I do so love this story! Keep it up you're almost there! n_n 3
QueenOfThePirates chapter 4 . 7/11/2009
Sorry I haven't been on for awhile! I've been gone for a week and will be gone for another two weeks tomorrow. So. . . NEW CHAPTERS! YAY!

I think Jay just screwed up a bit. Well maybe. He definitely didn't take a step in the direction he wanted to go in. Poor baby. I wonder what Charles is thinking? Hm. . . .

I love how this fits into the original story so well. You do a wonderful job of interpreting that. I love the way this is written.

Wonderful work Author-san. This makes me very very happy! n_n 3
Persidie chapter 5 . 7/7/2009
NO! I want the conclusion! please! it's awesome! it's almost realistic! I want to see Charles reaction the most!
buffyandspike-4ever chapter 5 . 7/7/2009
Oh, please update again soon. I can't wait to know what happens next. It's such a good story and I bet the next chapter's going to be just great. The confrontation between Jay and Charles finally. Please update!
QueenOfThePirates chapter 3 . 6/24/2009
Uwa! So amazing! It's like Jay's take on what happens in the series. I love it! Dumb jock man stealing Jay away from Charles, but even worse of Charles to not do anything about it. Oh well, Jay can just figure out another way to try and become better friends with Charles. I'm still trying to get over the fact that Charles let Jay have his first experience with a dumb nameless jock. XP

I love that gay vampire bait line! That made me laugh really hard.

I love how the story is progressing and I love how the characters are set up. Good job you! Please, keep up the good work Author-san, I would love to read some more. n_n 3
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