Reviews for Luck
llazo4108822 chapter 3 . 12/6/2013
I love this fanfic and you should make more chapters pleases.
FollieOfMadness chapter 3 . 8/1/2012
*Sing to the beat of 'Party Rock Anthem'*
(Make sweet love...)
(Al-read-y...)
"Come on and just make out al-ready!"
"Now you just have to put your lipssss to-gether"
"Hurry up and just GOOOOO stead-y"
"Now you just have to put your lipssss to-gether"

"Come on and just make out al-ready!"
"Now you just have to put your lipssss to-gether"
"Hurry up and just GOOOOO stead-y"
"We just wanna see you... fuck (fuck, fuck, fuck)

"Come on and fuck already"

"You in love? That's alright. We just wanna see you make love tonight"
"You feel the urge? You know she does"
"Fuck her already; it's like a crime, I'll call the fuzz"
"Grab her titties but don't go, fuck already down on the flo"

"Bro! You don't need no road's where you goin'"
"All you need make no mistake is some via-gro, just bang that chick"
"BANG HER BRO! You totally know she wants your dick"
"Just jerk you off, she totally wants tooo..." (Bang!)

"Come on and just make out al-ready!"
"Now you just have to put your lipssss to-gether"
"Hurry up and just GOOOOO stead-y"
"Now you just have to put your lipssss to-gether"

"Come on and just make out al-ready!"
"Now you just have to put your lipssss to-gether"
"Hurry up and just GOOOOO stead-y"
"We just wanna see you... fuck (fuck, fuck, fuck)

"Come on and fuck already"

"She won't shoot you down; make her face so white like a clown"
"Start whipin', she likes it like that AW CRAP, she suffocatin'!"
"She just wants to be - yo girlfriend"
"Just say 'make sweet love to me' - I recommend"
"Now she wants to see - yo dick"
"What are you waitin' for - fuck that CHICK, ICK, ICK... ICK..."

"Fuck her, already. She just wants yo jock. Fuck her, already. Fuck her, already. She just wants to suck you off"
"Fuck her, fuck her, fuck her, fuck her, make sweet love already, already, already"

"Come on and just make out al-ready!"
"Now you just have to put your lipssss to-gether"
"Hurry up and just GOOOOO stead-y"
"Now you just have to put your lipssss to-gether"

"Come on and just make out al-ready!"
"Now you just have to put your lipssss to-gether"
"Hurry up and just GOOOOO stead-y"
"We just wanna see you... fuck (fuck, fuck, fuck)

XD That felt so wrong to write. But it had to be done. It had to be.

FYI, good chap, chap.
FollieOfMadness chapter 2 . 8/1/2012
Naruto and Hinata, FUCK ALREADY.
Good chapter.
FollieOfMadness chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
Rakkih, how is that pronounced? Is it 'Rack-eye', 'Rack-ee', or 'Rack-kie (Rhymes with tie)'?
Ulquiorra9000 chapter 1 . 8/5/2010
Well, this is certainly novel! A luck-based Kekkei Genkai! I can see that being a source of both comic relief and peril later on, though maybe Rakkih will gain better control of his power and manifest it to be more of an asset than liability. he's certainly a team player, though, and at this point early in the series Naruto will need that extra person to keep him from messing everything up! If this goes on to the Land of Waves it'll be interesting to see how Rakkih's power plays out against Zabuza and Haku.
Gravity The Wizard chapter 1 . 6/29/2009
Please Continue!
Kage Bijuu chapter 3 . 4/5/2009
This actually can be a Epic story but you had to keep updating and I really start to like this story.
Kage Bijuu chapter 2 . 4/5/2009
This chapter well is made out very creative with some of the fight and I was surpise by the arrange marriage thing.
Kage Bijuu chapter 1 . 4/5/2009
This is actullay interesting story and a Kekkei Genkai based on luck is original.
Passionate-Eyes chapter 3 . 1/22/2009
i'm liking this story, especially that Rik is helping Naruto- realize how Hinata-hime has feelings for him
oddity chapter 3 . 1/21/2009
your doing perfectly fine with the romantic bits. All I would ask for in a story with this setting is that you have something unexpected happen. something drastic. but as i said the writing and plot in itself is great!
Blizzard of love chapter 2 . 1/15/2009
nice but sasuke is spelt sasuke and hyuga is spelt hyuga nice OC
Gravity The Wizard chapter 2 . 1/14/2009
Nice Start!
Aracade chapter 2 . 1/14/2009
I shall number my comments for ease of use. And it helps focus my insanity.

1. I like this so I'm now going to be alert.

2. What does a ninja machete look like?

3. Does Rakkih know every bad luck thing?

4. I'm getting the vibe That Rakkin's clan focuses on traps of various natures that hold a certian amount of risk to take advantage of their luck thus the more intense the battle, the greater the rush and finaly the greater the luck.

5. Considering I'm reminded of Resident Evil's Hunk when imagioning Rakkih it brought up a question. Any of the clan or does he have a costume that resembles Cobra Commander or Darth Vader? (sorry, insanity is catching)

6. I look forward to reading more and wish you the greatest of fans.
PsyCHo chapter 2 . 1/11/2009
While you can guess your story isn't the best around, it isn't bad. You write quite long chapters, and you use "enter", so all looks nice, and is readable.

It's SaSUke, not SaUSke.
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