Reviews for Forever Broken
detective-smartypants chapter 9 . 8/13/2009
OMG!

That was so amazing!

like, wow!
BubblyAmi ships DoctorRiver chapter 9 . 8/7/2009
luv the ending!
Sheethkal Shahar chapter 9 . 2/8/2009
You two should work on paragraphs and transitions. The story went by too quickly in certain places and capitilzed words don't work well, instead emphasize with descriptions or sentances. Oh and after being beat up so many times Shane would've stayed down after being stabbed in the abdomen so reality issue there. Other then that it was written pretty well.

Elodie!
ghostwhispererfan19 chapter 9 . 1/30/2009
I loved the ending especially Mel being pregnant
MelJimfan12 chapter 9 . 1/30/2009
Yay Mel and Jim are back together
Leah1 chapter 9 . 1/30/2009
I so loved this ending

You have to write another story soon
8RainbowBright8 chapter 9 . 1/30/2009
Great ending

Please update your other story
8RainbowBright8 chapter 8 . 1/29/2009
I have no words but GREAT CHAPTER

I'm glad Jim gave Shane what he deserved

Please update soon
Leah150 chapter 8 . 1/29/2009
Amazing chapter

Please update soon
ghostwhispererfan19 chapter 8 . 1/29/2009
I loved this chapter

I'm glad Shane got what he deserved

Please update this and your other story as well
MelJimfan12 chapter 8 . 1/29/2009
What can i say great chapter

Please update soon
8RainbowBright8 chapter 7 . 1/29/2009
Great chapters i hope everything will be alrigh

Update soon
Leah150 chapter 7 . 1/29/2009
Great chapters

Please update soon
MelJimfan12 chapter 7 . 1/29/2009
Great chapters i hope everything starts going the right way

Please update soon
ghostwhispererfan19 chapter 7 . 1/29/2009
Yay Mel stopped drinking I hope she's not pregnant

Please update soon
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