Reviews for Stolen
Verity Hemingway chapter 1 . 3/1/2009
This is so sad and well-written! I love your word choice and how you sort of personified things. I especially like how you said "Goose bumps sprouting on my skin like wildflowers." That's nice.

Verity Hemingway
timetravellingvampirewithawand chapter 1 . 1/28/2009
beautiful. absolubtly beautiful. i'm wiping away tears right now. your writing is simply amazing
RandomUser674 chapter 1 . 1/26/2009
This is really awesome! Just one thing:

"Soaring evergreen trees of the silent forest"

Soaring...I don't think that word really fits there. A bit of adjective/verb confusion there.

Everything else: PERFECT!
La Tua Cantante chapter 1 . 1/17/2009
This is completely amazing. There's no way you're really 14! I love it! It sounds like... I don't even know, it's just so beautiful!
AshleyMarie2012 chapter 1 . 1/6/2009
Whoa. That really blew me away. Powerful words & amazing imagery.

All I can say It was just flat out wonderful.

It was lovely. Purely lovely.
0Life-is-a-Song0 chapter 1 . 1/6/2009
I love this!

"Weeping, yelling, they both mean that you still have something left to lose"


Awesome job!