|Reviews for Curses!|
| QueenOfDragons2 chapter 6 . 11/12/2013
Okay, just a few things I'd like to point out...
1, in chapter 2, you wrote "memorized" instead of "mesmerized," and 2, I read somewhere that prior to the events of the game, Raz lived with both of his parents and several brothers and sisters (of course, that info isn't anywhere in the game, so I'm not surprised you apparently didn't know that; I think it's from the game's website, but I'm not sure if it there anymore).
Other than that, great job with this.
| FrictionX42 chapter 18 . 4/16/2013
Now THAT was a story! Incredibly good job extrapolating from the events in the game to when your story was set. It made everything flow so much more smoothly. I liked that your tale had funny bits, exciting bits, scary bits, and tantalizing bits... Every bit of it enjoyable. Nicely done all around.
| Billy Ruffian chapter 18 . 1/18/2013
This was a very good story, much better than I expected when I started reading it. Characterization and pacing were especially good. I think that I might prefer having some more characters from the game in the fic, but it was still an excellent bit of writing.
| Aryashi chapter 18 . 10/27/2012
This story was perfect and amazing and you NAILED the psychic worlds with amazing accuracy, even if removing the curse felt like a bit of an anti-climax. Still, well written, great use of foreshadowing, and all around good character interactions.
I also approve very much of your ship. It is a good ship, on you sail with skill and precision. Raz and Lili are cute together and you writ their relationship very VERY well. The curse transferring thing was a great plot point. :)
| Twisterfoot chapter 18 . 10/21/2012
Yes, that is a good thing.
| Mitsuki Shigamatsu chapter 2 . 5/27/2012
Uh-oh... Something must be really, REALLY wrong...
| http404error chapter 18 . 4/1/2012
I promised myself that I would never enjoy a fanfic.
You made me break that promise.
Thank you for the joy and fun this has added to my already Psychonautically obsessed mind.
| CandyIsYummyNomNom chapter 18 . 1/26/2011
I absolutely loved this! This could be Psychonauts Two! No joke! Thank you so much for the great story! This was truly exceptional!
| The Genius Mage chapter 18 . 6/24/2010
Heh, I just read all of this. It's really good, greatly detailed! I love everything in it, in fact, I've been inspired to start writing a Psychonauts fic of my own.
This is quite awesome. No glaring grammar errors I could see right off the bat, either. So much cuteness and in-character-ness...generally epic all together.
| Boys Should Kiss Boys More chapter 18 . 5/28/2010
Completely. And. Totally. Shawesome. I'm glad it was a little more romance-heavy than the action part. But you totally described everyone's minds really well. I loved Lili's concept; it makes me want Lili's and Fannie's and Clarisse's minds to be levels in the game. They sound incredly fun!
Great story; you're a wonderful writer!
| bellefantastique chapter 16 . 4/11/2010
I just love Milla! Great stuff! :P
| yamiishot chapter 18 . 10/18/2009
This was a delight to read, as were your other Psychonauts stories. I look forwards to more from you, hopefully. I'd love to know how they saved Lili's father, or how they brought down the perfume company.
| Digital-Dragon-Master chapter 18 . 8/6/2009
I have been SEARCHING for a good, long, not-abandoned Psychonauts fanfic and thought I'd never find one. How happy I am to be proved wrong. :)
I wish I'd had the time to review each chapter as I read, because this thing seriously DESERVES more attention. Only 30 reviews? Totally not fair. You crafted a beautiful BELIEVABLE expansion to the Psychonauts world. I LOVED Lili's mental world like nothing else - showed all the contradictions with her character and embraced them. (Heck, you just rock at Lili to start with.) Mrs. Croshaw's mental world made me applaud, too - it captured the Psychonauts puzzle-theme, but incorporated it into a fanfic. Hard to do, but rewarding. Clarisse's mental world is just...too much for me to say about it. 3 ADORED the Either, though. Like I said, expanded on the Psychonauts world - its inclusion was seamless.
And then there's all the freaking symbolism I spotted that may or may not have been just me over analyzing everything. Lili's arm and then the last part of her mom still on the string being her LEFT ARM just sort of jumped out at me. Mother symbolism, yay. EVERYONE has mother issues in Psychonauts, everyone.
And to finish this tl;dr review, can I say how utterly amused I am with the fact that on Raz's missions - and in his office - he's working with some of the relatives of the other campers? I'd love for you to flesh them out more - the other campers, that is - in one-shots or whatnot. (LOL, Elka and Chops in the first chapter? Did I read that right? Pfft, oh Elka.)
So yes. This is utterly awesome and I'm sad I've reached its end. The Raz x Lili fangirl in me was SO SATISFIED and the plot-lover enjoyed her candy too. You balanced everything out quite perfectly and the characters were spot on. You even managed to keep the same slightly morbid, genuinely funny humor Psychonauts prides itself on. :) I'll be watching you
| Brendan Casey chapter 18 . 6/15/2009
This wasn't just one of the greatest Psychonauts fanfictions I've ever read, it was one of the greatest fanfictions in general that I've ever read. The characters stayed very true to the way they were portrayed in the game. It had me on the edge of my seat ever since finishing the third page. The invisible wolves thing was genious by the way. It's very obvious to me that you are absolutely brimming with talent for writing, and I hope to see more of your work soon. Maybe your next story could have more of the kids at camp?
Just a suggestion.
| paxtofettel chapter 18 . 6/9/2009
And another great story comes to a close, Great Job.
Im looking foward to other fics maybe some involving the other campers,(hint..hint)