Absolutely brilliant. I have never loved an OC character more. Isnt she great? You portray the others so well, whilst putting them in very new situations. Harryhappy, confident and in love. Snapeamused by knowing when Dumbles doesnt and learning that Harry is totally different from who he thought. Ronskilled, knowledgeable and brave. I love it all. I could go on but everyone will just have to read it. Thank you.

Brilliant!

This was a great chapter :-)

HaHaHaHaaaaa

Great story. Ally is an awesome OC.

Simply beautiful

If Inwas their at Grimmakd Place I woukd tell Skbus dtut the fuck up. thi as is nit your house and the same goes for you as well Molly youngave shown nothing but disrespect toward Sirus and Harry and obeying Albus blindly without question. A man who in deep dodo wirh the Queen, YTHWH GOD and his son Yeshua The Messiah and with James and Lily Potter for whom are going to be given first dibs for his disobedience with reguards to their will.

Albus doesnt seem. to understand that you do not leave the unreoentant and remorseless alive you put them to death. What Akbus diesnt get is that The Queen would have issued a royal decree to execute all death eaters and atb try he same time another decree from heaven would Also have been given the execution of Tom Marvolo Riddle and all his death eaters since they do not repent and shiw remirse fir akk of their sins which are also crimes. And thus a one trip straight to hell after they are give the lecture as tonwhybthey are goung were they are going.

Sorry I can't read more of this story.
It was very unlikely that Harry would suddenly become so good at fights after just 2 years of training.
That he would search out schoolchildren to aid him in the coming war...
That said children would fight and kill adults...
No, sorry that is just too outlandish!

that'll be detention. actually no it won't I was defending myself from an attacker ill bring it to the board of govenors if I have to GOD I HATE THIS IN FFS screw the bint and tell her to stuff it

What a ride this fic has been. I binged in a day even though I was supposed to be working. I really liked the buildup all year long to the huge climactic battle at the Ministry at the end, and the dynamic and banter between the ADADA members is exactly the sort of thing I enjoy. The only thing I'm not a fan of is the whole pregnancy/baby thing, but that's just personal preference on my part and nothing to do with the writing. It certainly didn't detract from the enjoyment of the fic. I'll definitely be reading the sequel today and tomorrow!

They are in the middle of war. Handing out detentions to the leader of the war is beyond stupid. But then again the entire light side is beyond retarded. Why was hermione at the command post instead of Ron. That was retarded. Stupid decisions made only for the sake of stupid drama. ITS WAR YOU FUCKING IDIOTS! You don’t play nice, and you don’t tolerate idiots getting in the way helping the enemy with their stupid idealism. You remove them from your way.

I seem to have missed when exactly Harry killed someone in front of dumbledore...

Nice

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