Reviews for Blood of the Phoenix
Shadowdog11 chapter 22 . 7/21
"Lol have fun supervising yourself" should be his response
Shadowdog11 chapter 20 . 7/21
Meh. "Shut your feeble-minded pie hole Ron" would work too.
Shadowdog11 chapter 13 . 7/21
So I checked. I'm consistent in my assumption he didn't know about the baby. I may overreact but definitely read it the same the first time through lol
Shadowdog11 chapter 12 . 7/21
I'd forgotten this part. He goes through all of 10 seconds of shock about the pregnancy. Seriously? No anger (not 1 second flashes, true anger at having something hidden) or just outright numbing shock. I do remember liking this story and still do but he is human even if he forgives her instantly
MBrock94 chapter 31 . 7/21
I've had this among the "I'll read this eventually" fanfic for awhile now. I regret I never thought to read this sooner, and will definitely be reading the next few chapter 2morrow after I go to sleep (almost 4am here, and no, I'm not an early riser)
Melissa Fairy chapter 48 . 7/14
You do know Ron mother name is Molly right? Or was that on purpose?
Melissa Fairy chapter 12 . 7/13
She's pregnant! Surprise attack!

FYI I see a few grammar mistakestakes but not enough to get in the way...
Melissa Fairy chapter 6 . 7/13
You could honestly do with a better cover... Wish the chaps were longer but I'll take what I can get. I would also like to say I also like how you organize your chapters, having summer 4-5 chaps and such...
Melissa Fairy chapter 3 . 7/13
I LOVE IT! The only thing that bothers me is that ', should be "...

But who cares! The writing is still perfect!
Stone Elbow chapter 69 . 7/10
Brilliant drama, some of the best dialogue I've ever seen in fandom, some great action scenes, all together a great Super!Harry story.

4/5 stars for creativity. Positive points for creating new characters like Ally, Ruby and Abby. Positive points for unique phoenix powers given to Harry and Ally without falling back on the overused "phoenix animagus" thing. Negative creativity points for sticking to the canon storyline and ending Harry's fifth year dueling Voldemort in the Ministry Atrium. Positive points for completely unique romantic pairings (especially Ron/Daphne!)

A few word substitution mistakes (wary/weary, concurred/conquered, etc.) that got missed by your spellcheck; otherwise, excellent English makes for easy-to-read prose.
Guest chapter 48 . 6/8
Ew, why the heck they named her Molly?! No! Just no!
Darklordcomp chapter 1 . 6/4
don't worry harry, I to fall for GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOTH GUUUUUUUUUUURLS
anand891996 chapter 15 . 5/20
Well, been reading this for a bit... It's a bit...ummmm... The jumps are rather sudden... Makes reading it a bit weird...
Not a bad fic otherwise
CoolFanfictionLover chapter 69 . 4/21
wow just wow
loved your story
had been reading it non stop for one week every single spare time i have
wow
just loved it
please do continue
bye sumi
MSgt SilverDollar and Snake chapter 29 . 4/14
I guess Hermione thinks the DESERT will give her advanced notice so she can prepare for a fight. Go Luna & Ginny. - Snake
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