|Reviews for Do you feel this fire?|
| dail-of-the-air chapter 1 . 3/28/2010
Wow. That was quite some angst for Wanderer. Never quite expected that of her. Still, it's nice.
Watch for tense mix ups in the first half or so. It's mostly just subject-verb agreement, though.
This is a very good oneshot. Keep at it!
| crazi4thecullens chapter 1 . 1/8/2009
this was well written but sad and a little confusing.
| paper.creations chapter 1 . 1/7/2009
Very interesting! Not really in character, but you said you wrote it before finishing The Host.
I really liked it! It's like if The Seeker got inserted into Melanie's body.