Reviews for Bate, Bate, el Chocolate
Mickey chapter 1 . 8/22/2017
Very sweet
Owl Emporium chapter 1 . 8/27/2010
This was so sweet! It makes me want hot chocolate haha. Great job. (:
heartsewnsleeve chapter 1 . 1/25/2009
So cute!

Now, I'm craving hot chocolate hehe!

You deserve a cupcake for writing such an adorable story *gives cupcake*
Chica De Los Ojos Cafe chapter 1 . 1/8/2009
Aw cute! And I love hot chocolate! Combine it with some Detty and you've got magic on your hands!

~Chica~
Historianic chapter 1 . 1/8/2009
Loved it! Thanks a bunch for sharing it wth all of us! :)
AndromedaAiken chapter 1 . 1/8/2009
Excellent! D Please write more soon! I thought the kisses came a little..abruptly. There seemed to be no indication that they were dating or anything. p
Jacal Ste. Worme chapter 1 . 1/8/2009
Oh my, thank you for the sweet Detty fluff! I always love them! We can never get enough Detty! Write more!
didi6 chapter 1 . 1/7/2009
Great storie, whrite soon!
abovetherim chapter 1 . 1/7/2009
aw that was priceless, I really really loved it!
BraveLittleAnts chapter 1 . 1/7/2009
Aw a sweet short story full of Detty cuteness!

I loved it!
began-to-climb chapter 1 . 1/7/2009
Awe, that's sweet. I like the progression of the relationship and the tie-in you had with each one. Superb.
WantedtoDelete chapter 1 . 1/7/2009
Aw, very romantic and sweet, especially the last instalment:D

Thank you!