Reviews for Watching
DDwelling chapter 1 . 4/22/2012
haha great story! you should change your pairings though-lily luna potter is harry's daughter, not mom
storycat12 chapter 1 . 3/3/2012
Hilarious! I loved it!
Starzinmieyez chapter 1 . 8/16/2011
Haha, you should've SO put humor as a genre along with family :D
twilightscallingme chapter 1 . 12/16/2009
hahah this was refreshingly humorous! :)
mybutterflyshavesocksonthem chapter 1 . 11/30/2009
I really like this story, though at certain points I wasn't sure whether to laugh or cry, but at least the ending was happy!
Sometimes chapter 1 . 5/13/2009
PenonPaperFingersonKeys chapter 1 . 1/17/2009
I love this fanfic.

Specially love the voldie part.


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PokieDots chapter 1 . 1/13/2009
Haha, nice oneshot, lovely ending xD
ShadowMoonDancer chapter 1 . 1/11/2009
Esther chapter 1 . 1/10/2009
I so enjoyed the story! Amusing and adorable. I love the ending :) Though I agree it got a bit confusing figuring out the speaker. Perhaps you can add initials before each line, sort of like a drama script.
Airlady chapter 1 . 1/9/2009
This was quite amusing.
KlainePotter chapter 1 . 1/8/2009
I loved it so much!

my fav parts were:

“James! At least call him 'Professor Snivelus' when speaking of him!”


“Oh Voldie! May we have a word?”

“You may not!”

“Don't have much choice, Tommy me lad.”

by the way... who is algie?
ZAPBETH chapter 1 . 1/7/2009
Trying to figure out who was talking at some points got to be a nuisance, and it confused me a bit toward the end when new people started showing up. I think I would have liked it better if it wasn't just dialog.

Interesting concept, and I liked the ending.
mercurywrites chapter 1 . 1/7/2009
I love the end! "Oh, Voldie! May we have a word?" "You may not!" "Don't have much choice, Tommy me lad." Hahahaha
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