Reviews for The Problem with Purity
TPalesh chapter 62 . 12/26/2015
Wow. I spent my days and nights reading this wonderful story... And finally, I finished. Absolutely beautifully written... I love the way you portrait the charactersHermione and severus being both so witty. And Drarry... Well those two are simply cute. I'm glad that Ron reunited with Harry and Hermione, as well. The concept of blood magic, the story of Salazar and Solace and the idea of the castle, castina and fawkes communicating with 'the humans' is simply brilliant. This Fanfic offered great entertainmentI laughed, worried, cried... Well, I felt with every character during the plot. Thank you for this beautiful story! (and pls excuse my bad English, I'm not a native speaker).
Guest chapter 62 . 12/22/2015
As I read this I fell in and out of love with this, betrayed that Snape could do such things to a clearly enamoured Hermione, and touched by how upset that Castina was anout her injury. It pains me to say this but I failed yet again to make a wise choice on the music that I listened to (rather dramaticly sad solo piano music) and in several parts it made me cry, especially the latter part with Ashwin. The battle scene is amazing, (I love the proposalI was listening to "At the Ivy Gate" and then "Till Death Do Us Part") there are fair few people who could have written it so well, thank you for taking the time and effort to write such a long epic love story, it is with a heavy heart that I say that I will have a hard time finding a fanfic about the lovely couple that even comes close to being as good as this one... Again.
Thank you

-Fiona Makara-Tempest
Kiara Benihime chapter 25 . 12/19/2015
While your story is well written, I feel like you've made Hermione much too powerful. It truly is ridiculous how little flaws she has, and isn't very believable, though a valient effort was made. She's the most powerful character in the story, including all the professors, is a unicorn Animagus, very skilled Occluemens, communicates telepathically with magical creatures, cures lycanthropy, always wins battles of wit, and invents incredibly powerful spells. It's very aggravating to read and I'm afraid I cannot continue to do so for that very reason. However, this is my personal tastes, and this is undoubtedly well written, just not for me.
LK-HoGwArTs-hEaDgIrL chapter 62 . 12/19/2015
Brilliant Story. Amazing. Xxx
Guest chapter 62 . 12/17/2015
I have no idea if you still do the map -thing after all these years, but Seinäjoki, Finland :)
I loved your story, very well written and unique. I'm sad to see it ending.
petabread chapter 1 . 12/14/2015
I have been glued to both my laptop and phone for the past few days, grabbing every moment in between work and sleeping to read you work. It is by far one of the best fanficitions i have ever read and i realised after i'd finished, that i couldn't just leave the world you'd created without reviewing.
Thank you.
WhereforeArtThou chapter 61 . 12/13/2015
I just finished re-reading this, and it was even better the second time.

I always cry at this last chapter, when we return to Stebbins' POV, and I think I finally figured out why: much like the HP books, as a reader I approached this story from the outside, not existing in this world and not knowing it or any of its original characters, but soon I was firmly inside Hermione's head and deeply caught up in this beautiful universe as if it were all happening to me. But just like reaching the end of one of the books, it comes time to say goodbye, and being pulled away from Hermione and watching her laughing in Severus' arms from a distance, I really experience that sad sense of leaving this beautiful world and returning to my far more mundane one.

You're truly gifted. Thank you so much for writing this.
Guest chapter 45 . 12/11/2015
You're hot then you're cold... You're yes then you're no... The theme song to Snape and Hermione's relationship...

This shit is KILLING me!
Guest chapter 25 . 12/11/2015
Its 3 in the morning... Ive been Telling myself, for the last 4 chapters, 'this will be my last one for the night ' . of course, every time I finish a chapter, I see your AN at the end telling me What to expect in the next chapter... Needless to say, I'll be needing some strong coffee in the morning! No regrets!
well.scrubbed.rube chapter 13 . 12/10/2015
The Christmas decorations had me grinning from ear to ear! I loved Snape's reaction!
Guest chapter 62 . 11/17/2015
Even better the third time! Thanks again, please write more HG/SS!
Lheto chapter 62 . 11/16/2015
Wow. What an epic journey! This fanfic is the most amazing thing I've read here so far *_* I'm deeply impressed.
Black Doves chapter 1 . 11/9/2015
I adore this story and keep coming back to read it again and again. I believe I am beginning my fifth read through now and I thank you so much for writing this.
alice022 chapter 62 . 11/1/2015
Probably the 6th or so time I read this and it still probably my favourite story and I ha e read a lot :) x
Vukk chapter 3 . 10/19/2015
I am just re-reading this, so you will likely not even see this, but I glanced at what you said at the end about where the apostrophe goes. I see what you were thinking, but it isn't the 'Marauders' Map', but the 'Marauder's Map. The map belongs to the Marauders, and not each individual Marauder. As the possession is to one thing (the group) JKR has it right. It is the same as 'The Book Club's meeting room', or 'The Book Clubs' meeting room'. If there were two different groups of Marauders who used the map, you would be correct. Just as if their were two book clubs using the meeting room, it would then be correct.
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