Reviews for The Problem with Purity
Guest chapter 51 . 4/18
Guest chapter 50 . 4/18
Tiny omissions will get her into difficulties.
Guest chapter 49 . 4/18
Glad she won't be unexpectedly knocked up. I wondered about that.
Guest chapter 48 . 4/18
Annnnnnd... Suddenly I'm picturing someone entirely different playing the role of Severus Snape. That's odd.
Guest chapter 47 . 4/17
Well good! I've identified far too much with the lack of sex.
Guest chapter 46 . 4/17

Whatever, however, I take issue with this whole beauty and the beast notion of changing your man and making him perfect. Because men are so flawed that they need women to change that. Good God, I've tried to change enough men in my life because of the stupid bias bread into me by children's fairytale stories.
Guest chapter 45 . 4/17
Guest chapter 44 . 4/17
? Huh?
Guest chapter 43 . 4/17
Finally, thank you Marilyn, the chapter that didn't make me want to cry.
Guest chapter 42 . 4/17
Hmmm. Good.
Guest chapter 41 . 4/17
Oh no!

Best laugh:
"I take it back. He deserves to be cursed. Please, be my guest."
Guest chapter 40 . 4/17
Yeehaw! The story is bad ass.
Guest chapter 39 . 4/17
Awesome, amazing story. I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it
Guest chapter 38 . 4/17
Several typos, but this is such an awesome story... I couldn't catalog them all this time. Too tiring.
Guest chapter 36 . 4/16
The story is amazing. I keep waiting for her to use that unicorn blood on SS. It looks like that will be happening soon.

She forced the words out thickly. "Viktor's in love me."
*love with me

We have a good time when were together."

"These sounds like good points,"
*Those sound like

I couldn't put up with night after night about Quidditch.
*talking about

transformed werewolves on the full
? Doesn't make sense to me...

Bill made it in at dinner time having had to work during the day.
*time, having

vocal chords were abused;
*vocal cords

"And now you think you've inherited her genes?" the blond asked.

Says the kid who refused to take muggle studies? I think not. *abilities -And rework the next paragraph accordingly.

it wasn't fair to take out her distemper on him.

*ill temper (distemper is a canine illness)
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