Reviews for The Problem with Purity
Guest chapter 36 . 4/16
The story is amazing. I keep waiting for her to use that unicorn blood on SS. It looks like that will be happening soon.

She forced the words out thickly. "Viktor's in love me."
*love with me

We have a good time when were together."

"These sounds like good points,"
*Those sound like

I couldn't put up with night after night about Quidditch.
*talking about

transformed werewolves on the full
? Doesn't make sense to me...

Bill made it in at dinner time having had to work during the day.
*time, having

vocal chords were abused;
*vocal cords

"And now you think you've inherited her genes?" the blond asked.

Says the kid who refused to take muggle studies? I think not. *abilities -And rework the next paragraph accordingly.

it wasn't fair to take out her distemper on him.

*ill temper (distemper is a canine illness)
Guest chapter 36 . 4/16
Another amazing yet heartbreaking chapter. Damn, you're good at all his.

that she was finished several papers that she had not
*finished with several

"Voldemort has gone to great lengths to ensure him immortality,"
*ensure his immortality,"

All the details are there" Draco asked.
*there?" Draco asked.

wouldn't be coach of the Gryffindor team for much longer.
*captain (not coach)
Guest chapter 35 . 4/16
Horsehead and heavy chapter. I hope there's a happy chapter coming sometime soon.
Guest chapter 34 . 4/16
Guest chapter 33 . 4/16
"when a strong wizard casts good wards on rooms or a small piece of property, they can often last lifetimes."
Perhaps you meant to say they would last for generations? It would make more sense here. Especially given that the next sentence refers to something that lasts a lifetime, 'generations' would make it clearer.

Great story.
Guest chapter 32 . 4/16

fit of distemper
*ill temper

call her own it
*call her on it
Guest chapter 31 . 4/16
The store has become really, really sad.
catslovesushi chapter 61 . 4/16
Wow this has been one helluva tale. I know I didn't review every chapter but it was only because I was so sucked into the story.

I know there's an epilogue left but thank you for sharing!
catslovesushi chapter 60 . 4/16
OMG that was fucking intense!
Guest chapter 30 . 4/15

bezillion years

*same quirks

Really, so few typos in this awesome story.
Guest chapter 29 . 4/15
A good laugh or two

"I've had plenty of practice catching people I don't particularly want to see naked in flagrante delicto."

And then an omg what an arsehole moment at the end!
Guest chapter 28 . 4/15
I hope SS is pissed that she endangered herself?
Guest chapter 27 . 4/15
Boo who who?
Guest chapter 26 . 4/15
That was A novel approach!
Guest chapter 25 . 4/15
Oh my, who will it be?
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