|Reviews for More Like Her|
| hpfan1987 chapter 17 . 8/26/2010
hillarious! who wouldnt want to walk in on edward?
| hpfan1987 chapter 13 . 8/26/2010
I absolutly love this chapter! Bellas letter was a bit bittersweet, but I happen to think that the best letters are that way..
| girl-rabbit chapter 1 . 9/4/2009
| Kedispaghetti chapter 22 . 3/11/2009
Great Story, I can't wait for the sequel!
| newplacebo chapter 22 . 3/9/2009
This is the first Twilight fan fiction I finished, mainly because you wrote a great story. I have started quite a few stories on this site and found them to be poorly written, but not yours. It was intelligent and interesting. I look forward to the next one.
| Chel88 chapter 22 . 3/6/2009
That was so sad...I was practically crying it was that emotional! You did such a beautiful job in this last chapter in capturing Edward's emotions.
Oh, and that last line...It just sums up everything!
I cannot wait to see where you go with the sequel...I will. def. be waiting for it.
| Mike in the Mirror chapter 22 . 3/6/2009
Oh man, ending with a cliffie is just killing me. Love the story, so you just gotta do a sequel to let us know about Piper's trek and whether or not she and Edwards get together in the end
| Lilith Wolf chapter 22 . 3/6/2009
aww, i cant wait for you to update
| Tyeslan chapter 22 . 3/6/2009
Oh no! Cliff hanger! I really want to know what happens with Piper!
| Tyeslan chapter 21 . 3/5/2009
I love what you have done with this story! I really want to see what happens with Piper and Edward!
I'm really glad to see what happened with Edward and Bella!
| Chel88 chapter 21 . 3/5/2009
Wow, I didn't think Bella was going to be so welcoming to Edward but I'm glad she did...and how she told him that HE needs to get over HER.
The girl made total sense...and she doesn't even know Piper!
"You could very well be the ones to put each other back together..." I adore that line...Edward and Piper are perfect together in my mind...
| MNDNCR322 chapter 18 . 3/4/2009
This is the first time I have commented on this story and I just wanted to let you know I think it is very good. I love everything twilight. I was against Edward with anyone but Bella at first but I have come to love Piper and now that I have read chapter 18 its awesome. I actually live about 15 miles from Valdosta Ga and work there how ironic is that. Please keep up the good work.
| jenjan24 chapter 20 . 3/4/2009
Poor Piper...and actually poor Edward too. They both have so much baggage. Obvioulsy very different kind of baggage, but its still there.
I hope that Edward doesn't run off again. I think Piper really needs him, and you know what? Edward really needs Piper.
Let me tell you..I have been so excited with all the new chapters. I was just thinking about whether you added another one and then came Chapter 20. Thank you:) I know how hard it is to consistently update a story.
| Chel88 chapter 20 . 3/4/2009
That was so intense. There was so much going on in this chapter and I LOVED it all.
I mean, on the one hand, you had Edward finally giving in and showing Piper how he really feels about her...and then, he kind of went and messed things up again. Well, I don't think he was expecting Piper to tell him what she said right?
That was so sad...that she lost her child...in such an awful manner.
I would love to see this story from Piper's POV...because I think the emotion could be captured must better if we knew what she was actually feeling and thinking.
| Chel88 chapter 19 . 3/3/2009
I LOVE Piper..lol..she certainly didn't beat around the bush did she?
She had every right to tell him what she did. I mean, how awful to feel like you're competing with someone you've never met...that must suck!
Anyways, great chapter!