Reviews for Mrs Robinson
ccase13 chapter 5 . 9/24/2011
Poor Sammy has all the bad luck. It's a shame the ghost didn't con Dean into thinking she was a mortal.
Lilith2007 chapter 5 . 9/14/2010
Dean is such an awesome big brother! :) Poor little Sammy but I don't blame her . Sammy is just adorable! Awesome story hun!
Lilith2007 chapter 1 . 9/14/2010
OMG! I just wanted to leave a review on this chapter because about two years ago my family and I actually stayed at that motel! Not for Mardi gras unfortunately but its just so cool that you mention it in this story .
ziggy.uk chapter 5 . 9/13/2010
Great final chapter. Good that Pastor Jim finally got Sam to open up and talk to him and that John was caring and concerned when he spoke to his youngest. Good that Sam opened up to Dean about the assult and that Dean could confirm the same thing had happened to him with a witch, and that Sam got Dean to open up too as he really needed to let go of some of his guilt. Fab ending, only Dean could turn a moment like that into an insult fest but it's what they both needed, proving things were getting back to normal and they were ready to hit the road.

A great read, thanks.
ziggy.uk chapter 4 . 9/13/2010
Well Dean arrived in the nick of time for Sam! Not good for Sam but at least she was distracted and Dean managed to grab the locket and destroy it. And great to have a concerned and fatherly John calmly telling Dean what to do for Sammy and not reaming Dean out for leaving him when they though the spirit had been banished. Totally in characted Dean gently teasing his brother when he finally wakes up.
ziggy.uk chapter 3 . 9/13/2010
Dean didn't disappoint with his reaction when entering the hotel room to find Sam being molested by Mrs Robinson's spirit and not a hot girl! Good job he had some salt handy! Not surprised that Sammy wanted that shower and that Dean would try the ritual again just in case it hadn't been perfect first time round. Good thinking to try and find something that was keeping Helen there and typical Winchester luck that their ruse didn't work and Helen realised Dean didn't have the locket. And now Mr Broadbent has inadvertently revealed Sam's location to Helen and Dean is off somewhere on the streets of New Orleans trying to locate his little brother. Not a good situation at all but it will make for an awesome next chapter!
ziggy.uk chapter 2 . 9/13/2010
OMG Dean is going to regret hooking up and having his fun now he's come back to the hotel room and found Sam at the mercy of Mrs Robinson! And it looks like he has arrived back in the nick of time after what she was doing to him. Hope Dean doesn't make a joke of it as Sam is traumatised enough! So the cleansing ritual didn't work like expected though it must have had a slight effect on her as it made Helen feel funny. Guess it will be back to the drawing board. And Dean's fun will be curtailed as he won't risk leaving his little brother alone in the hotel room again!
ziggy.uk chapter 1 . 9/13/2010
Interesting start, a hunt in New Orleans during Mardi Gras and the boys staying in the actual haunted hotel room! Loved the banter between them, Dean mercilessly teasing his little brother to get a rise out of him and embarrass him as much he can! Hope Dean can keep his mind on the hunt and not get excited about everything going on around him!
cornev chapter 5 . 1/22/2009
I can never get enough of the big brother protective Dean, this was a great story for that! And Sam's sensitivity, reactions, and efforts to cope were so perfectly Sam.

LOVE the wise and sneaky line :)

Great job all around. -Corrie
PhoenixDragonDreamer chapter 5 . 1/22/2009
Great ending, m'love!

*Huggles*

Mandy
pinkphoenix1985 chapter 5 . 1/21/2009
I just loved this! I loved how you guys did Pastor Jim amd John!

great ending!
devon99 chapter 5 . 1/20/2009
A very nice conclusion to a much enjoyed story:)

Loved the openess at the end between the boys with Dean admitting his feelings of guilt at not protecting Sam and poor Sam admitting his own confusion and conflicting emotions.

Now if only the boys could be so open on the show!

Thanks again both for a great read.
criminally charmed chapter 5 . 1/20/2009
I really wish they hadn't killed off Jim. He would have been a great source of comfort to the boys over the years. But there is always Bobby.
winchesterxgirl chapter 5 . 1/19/2009
aww...dean playing mother hen...that's so cute. and calling him a kitten...lol...

i keep forgetting...sam was sexually assaulted...poor sammy. now he's crying...aww...dean is such a good older brother.

wow. they totally got paid for that gig. awesome. now therapy or ammo? that is the quesiton.

i like sams reaction to jim trying to help...i'm a winchester...

aw...he didn't want his brother and dad to know...aw.

i know...i'm using 'aw' a lot..but i just woke up, and this is one of those chapters.

love that...the lame comments and learning them from his brother.

nice with sam there...i want you to be honest. finally someone trying to get him to open up...very nice. wise and sneaky? that is a perfect description.

that was the perfect ending. i loved it.
calcium77 chapter 5 . 1/19/2009
Nice conclusion to the story. Talks with Dean will help him heal I am sure. He is the best big brother ever.

Loved the story. Looking forward to whatever you write next.

kat
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