|Reviews for To End in Serenity|
| senawario chapter 1 . 4/28
very nice, well written story; thanks!
| HJP4Life chapter 6 . 4/14
Ah-ha well done! Awesome job with this story, I enjoyed it immensely. You took the plot in a direction that I liked and it turned out good. I especially liked the way you reiterated that last little section from the beginning but changed some stuff up. I will be looking for more of your work
| HJP4Life chapter 5 . 4/12
Love the story, next chapter is the last, waiting to see how you finish it
| HJP4Life chapter 2 . 4/10
Hmm, digging the story so far. Well done
| HJP4Life chapter 1 . 4/10
Interesting story. I've always liked the time travel fics. A bit confusing on how they took over the bodies though. Was the fact that the past two leaving with time turners just make them disappear and the others took their place?
| Guest chapter 6 . 11/10/2014
would of, could of, should of, should be would have, could have, or should have or rather, would've, could've or should've.
| SomeGuyFawkes chapter 1 . 10/24/2014
This story was solid, workmanlike, entertainment with a good ending. Thanks for posting.
| Priya Ashok chapter 6 . 9/18/2014
Good one. Thank you.
| potterheadcharles chapter 6 . 9/17/2014
Nice story...one of the better time travels.
| Trskld chapter 1 . 8/26/2014
"Ron, we're here to kill you." - I kinda get the feel that this is going to be a rather different time-travel fic than the norm. There are several common (coughoverusedcough) themes - Dumbledore-bashing, Harry training in the RoR (why always RoR?), Hermione finally sorting her hair, Harry being stinking rich from the trust fund - but as it's the first chapter and you're already referencing Vogon poetry (THHG2TG for the win!), it's fine. Sassy Harry is always a laugh, as long as he's still dim, Hermione is plain, brilliant, and plain brilliant, and I am majorly happy that Ron has not been ignored! Wahoo Roonil Wazlib! If the summary is anything to go by, I am massively greatful that Hermione will end up with Ron as she is meant to. Anyhoo - on with the show. Or book. Whichever.
| Gexorian chapter 6 . 5/27/2014
Excellent, simply excellent.
| Guest chapter 5 . 4/4/2014
You said Trelawney did 2 of the 4 prophecies. However, you wrote Trelawney giving 3 prophecies and you never told us what the 4th prophecy is.
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/4/2014
Have not of. Could have, would have, should have, must have. NOT OF. Of is the sound the contraction makes. Would've sounds like would of. Could've sounds like could of. And so on.
| helpfulfairy92 chapter 6 . 11/19/2013
I love love loved this story! Glad to see Harry finally getting out from dumbledoors thumb! Anyway great plot line and was easy to read! Yay thanks for sharing this with us :)
| Mari Wollsch chapter 6 . 7/13/2013