|Reviews for Until The Sun Turns Black|
| Simaril chapter 2 . 7/20/2011
Oh dear God! Vampire Mike! That is too disturbing for words.
Westminster Abbey Emmett, seriously? That is all kinds of wrong. The Austin Powers impression made laugh my ass off. In fact I was thoroughly enjoying Rosalie POV until the last line - Bella Fucking Swan. All the hassle of the last few months and yet still she was disrupting my life. That made me all kinds of angry.
Loving the story, now I’m off to write some more.
| Simaril chapter 1 . 7/20/2011
The wonderful Mary-Alice-Brandon-Cullen recommended I read this story and one chapter in and I am hooked.
Shifting POVs are difficult to write but you have mastered it in the first chapter. Each POV has a distinct voice appropriate to their character that makes the switch seamless.
My favorite line was – ‘Carlisle had told me that getting daily deliveries of clothing wasn't helping us blend into the scenery...’ Bless her. Alice is a great character to write and you do a wonderful job of making her fun without being flippant.
I am saving the next chapter as a reward for me finishing my own chapter but rest assured you will be hearing from me again.
| csp4 chapter 31 . 4/9/2011
"During Trauma Stress Disorder" LOL LOL LOL
OMG, I'm actually feeling sorry for Jessica! Reading this story had finally broken me::((
I need a valium:(
| csp4 chapter 30 . 4/9/2011
I already know Harry is dead so...
Oh, Billy:( Grrrrrr
Please, please, please, please, please have a happy ending!
| csp4 chapter 29 . 4/9/2011
Oh, Jasper:( Grrrrrr
Oh, Alice:( Grrrrrr
Oh, Edward:( Grrrrr
Oh, now what?
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| csp4 chapter 27 . 4/9/2011
Irina is almost as irritating as Tanya was. So 1 dementional
OMG Bella:( How much can she take?
| csp4 chapter 26 . 4/9/2011
Oh, Nurse Mallory's at it again:)
| csp4 chapter 25 . 4/9/2011
I love Laurent's sweatshirt::)) How demoralizing for him! LOL
"Keep vigil, Laurent." Struck me as odd for Carlisle to say this. Altho, it wouldn't be odd if Carlisle suspected:)
Edward is definately mentally ill:(
| csp4 chapter 24 . 4/8/2011
The car Alice rented::)) LOL mustard yellow
| csp4 chapter 21 . 4/8/2011
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| csp4 chapter 23 . 4/8/2011
"Oh thank God" is right!
| csp4 chapter 22 . 4/8/2011
"Bastard dog! I didn't want short hair!" LOL LOL LOL
And to make matters worse, Jake's the Alpha now:( The world is ending:(
| csp4 chapter 20 . 4/8/2011
OMG can any more happen? I'm exhausted from everything happening