Reviews for Lonely Umong Us
Allbright chapter 1 . 4/27/2012
I'm not entirely sure how I feel about them being long lost lovers but I do know that I recently started watching the show and the idea of them having other relationship on their home planet crossed my mind multiple times. I like your writing, you did a good job of making Sally and Tommy seem close. Good work!
cutelittlemuffinhasaknife chapter 1 . 10/23/2009
Wow, I loved that.

you should do a story where someone finds out

there togther. great job again
IlovetowriteSMP chapter 1 . 8/27/2009
I wouldn't call it incest. They are aliens who are not actually family. Sally is not even really a woman and Tommy is very old, if I remember it right. I am not sure what 'gender' they even are on their home planet.

I found the part where she fell asleep to be very sweet.
Bunny1 chapter 1 . 2/11/2009
Aw, that's just so sweet! Not a pairing I'd thought of, but I love it now!;)
happychica chapter 1 . 1/23/2009
Nice. The last paragraph seemed a little OOC, but it was sweet nonetheless.