Reviews for Breathe No More
anonymous reader chapter 3 . 7/20/2014
This is an amazing story and i look forward to the next chapter.
XenoXx chapter 2 . 2/10/2014
I really like this story and I hope it continues. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Snowy chapter 3 . 4/25/2009
Interesting ;)

I don't have much to say but I look forward to the next chapter :)
Miles Beyond chapter 3 . 1/19/2009
It's tough to find things in this story that could use improvement.

One thing that was slightly unclear (I don't expect many people will care about the difference) was who Iroh is. The same name was used for two different characters, depending on whether the English or Japanese names are used. Is he the taller Cappy with a blue shirt (English version) or the shorter kid with a crush on Honey (Japanese version)?

So far, this is a very good story, and I look forward to the next chapter!
kirby163 chapter 3 . 1/10/2009
Matter, like Dark Matter? Wonderful, Tiff's got a crush on an evil energy sucking bad guy
Gatita101 chapter 1 . 1/9/2009
wow.I have a really good feeling about this if I get a good feeling,that means it's bound to be you keep the insperation up.

~The Little CatGirl