|Reviews for Dawn|
| Miss Mila chapter 1 . 1/10/2009
I think you could have continued it to have a bit more of Liv's thoughts, but other than that it was good. The Hiatus is ALMOST over. Whoo!
Lol, good job,
| JT4Life chapter 1 . 1/9/2009
aw, how sweet! what a great moment... and so early on, too bad it wasn't in the ep!
| bearlee-there chapter 1 . 1/9/2009
Very nice. Could definitely see this after that final scene in which there was so much subtext.
You're very good with these characters. Thank you for posting. :)
| wjobsessed chapter 1 . 1/9/2009
I had to go watch the last few minutes of the pilot again to get your perspective. This is good. There is soo much unspoken conversation going on near the end of the pilot. And she starts to smile when she realises he's not going anywhere...
Your story works, and she really would have benefitted from your ending.
| Ocein chapter 1 . 1/9/2009
ahh...i'm melting inside. Nice work! I'm so glad you spoke of their need for personal space because they did just meet. Very nicely done :)