|Reviews for Redemption|
| yuelan chapter 10 . 9/11/2009
Congratulations, your story crosses the world... I'm frensh, so i appologise for the mistakes i will probably do writting this.
This story is absolutly fabulous. I'd already read "A lesson in release" and i'm keen on it too. It's a little bit difficult for me to explain exactly what i think of your stories. It's... fascinating, the way you see the caracters, the very... intimate way you tells us their "life".
thanks a lot for al of this.
P.S. : si tu parle français, je vais avoir l'air très ridicule avec mon petit mot en anglais... qui n'est probablement pas très compréhensible. encore merci...
| Kimiko chapter 10 . 8/17/2009
Aw shucks,that was just t0o sweet,..l0ved it,i alwas th0ught that james had that g0od part in him ü
| Aria DeLoncray chapter 10 . 7/21/2009
Amazing story! I really love your James. I've always been fascinated by his character. I would love to see a sequel!
| oldsoul1964 chapter 3 . 6/27/2009
This is a sweey story
| MysticKitty21 chapter 10 . 5/29/2009
Wow. This story was fantastic. I really really liked it. The detail that you put into it was amazing, and I loved that you gave James a happy ending. And I loved the naked James snippets. God Cam Gigandet is so sexy. I would love to have my way with him.
Although a sequel would be awesome, just for more of your great writing, I don't think it is really necessary. So I think it is up to you, what you want to do. Happy writing! I think I am gonna go browse your profile...
| MysticKitty21 chapter 8 . 5/29/2009
I will help him clean it off! M...butterscotch...
Ahem. This chapter was insane. I can understand the hate and pain and anger. Altho I have never felt the need to kill people that remind me of my ex, I still know what its like to want to kill his new girlfriend. Not that I ever would, but I get mad crazy thoughts sometimes.
Sorry, went off on a tangent there. One more chapter!
| MysticKitty21 chapter 4 . 5/28/2009
M...James washboard abs...oh God...
| MysticKitty21 chapter 3 . 5/28/2009
Oh God num. James covered in Sprinkles and whipped cream and choc. sauce. I'm drooling.
Very much liking the story though. I usually dont like when people compleatly change a certain scene that is direct from a book or a movie, (even tho I know you had to) but you did it very well. I will keep reading now...
| feminin chapter 10 . 5/14/2009
good story it even made my eyes get watery and its nice too see different sides of people.
| Elizabeth Black 666 chapter 9 . 5/10/2009
| athendora99 chapter 10 . 5/6/2009
oh its over! I loved it so much it was the best fanfic I have EVER READ it was amazing sensational and lets not forget sexey I loved the james has chocolate sauce thing I have read a lot of fanfiction and I only comment on the ones I realy like and if I had to pick top five your story is number ONE! no better fanfic out there so im begging you please write a sequel if you dount im might just die of fanfic starvation
| anonymous.creation chapter 10 . 5/5/2009
wow that was a beautiful story
| XxThisXisXHalloweenxX chapter 6 . 5/4/2009
This story is amazing, and I once again recognized a Princess Bride line "I can track a falcon on a foggy day."
| celinewilliam chapter 10 . 4/30/2009
Nice story, so sad at the begining, but full of hope at the end. I would be pleased to read a sequel to it.
| celinewilliam chapter 3 . 4/29/2009
How amazing your stories are ! I like this one too !