Reviews for A Lesson in Fate
chocolatelovergirl chapter 4 . 12/7/2011
chocolatelovergirl chapter 3 . 12/7/2011
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yearprincess chapter 18 . 11/29/2011
This might just be where I want to stop reading.
CullenHathaway chapter 9 . 10/24/2011
im sorry but Edward is starting to REALLY piss me off. Cant he fucking see that Bella's with Jasper and will never go back to him! he needs to freaking move on because he bloody well knows Bella isnt his mate! GRRR
filmdork chapter 1 . 9/30/2011 my message wasnt necessary about me calling it "the ohio state university". But so far...i like the new one. Since I live in Columbus, if there are any issues regarding Ohio, I will point them out only for reference to make the story better. But again, realizing the story is over.
TwistedNeiviv chapter 54 . 9/26/2011
Over? Huh? What?


Nevermind - I see now there is another installation of the series ... good series, btw!
Drithligh chapter 18 . 8/21/2011
Wow. This whole story is so much more involved than I ever thought it would be.
RowenaEagleEyes chapter 45 . 7/30/2011
hmm where to start. I enjoyed reading most of this story. i know you said dont choose sides but im TEAM JASPER ALL DAY! i hate the fact that Bella strung both of them along. its like she never really accepted her part in all the heartbreak she caused. in fact i think the apology she gave jasper was BS. i dont think Bella and Edward make a good couple. I think the only reason he changed was because of her stupid diary she gave him. its like she used Jasper to get Edward to change for her. how messed up is that. i also think the first story was much better in my opinion.; so im probably not gonna read the third one. but you are an excellent writer. Rosalie got it right when she said Fuck Bella! i trully didint like her in this story. i dont like people who toy with anothers persons heart
jonzie chapter 9 . 7/29/2011
I'm really liking this story so far. Although Edward was paranoid and controlling, you're painting the picture of how and why he became that way. He obviously didn't know where to draw the line, but after living a mundane existence for over a century I can somewhat "understand" his thought process. If you think about how desperate and lonely some people get after being single and/or alone for a year or two, just imagine how desperate you'd be after being that way for more than a lifetime. He was trying to hold on to the one happiness he's ever known and made massive mistakes in the process. He just needed to learn how to be in a relationship and it looks like he's learning that now. Jasper had an advantage because he had century's of more experience. At first I was team Jasper. But now I'm starting to think that Edward wasn't completely at fault. He was inexperienced and in addition to that Bella never voiced her concerns. Edward can't read HER mind so how was he supposed to know what he was doing wrong? Bella basically punished him without telling him WHY beforehand(kinda unfair). Anyway, is nice to see them learning the errors of their ways.
xPixie-Chick chapter 54 . 7/12/2011
Hi me...again ) I completely loved how you wrote Bella here as a vampire. She sounds like what I would expect her to be...honestly though I reallly wanted to read more of the ALT ending XD you just make everything so luring! again enjoyed reading this D
ec.blaiseluver chapter 13 . 5/30/2011
I didn't want Jasper with Kelly, so I stopped reading, sorry.
sneakystuff chapter 2 . 5/30/2011
okay, i just found your stories and i know you said not to pick sides but I HATE EDWARD! he is a manipulative little shit! sorry but i had to say it! btw LOVE YOUR STORY!
twi nana chapter 34 . 4/18/2011
wow, just wow...
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